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Peakless Performance

He’s got a whole lotta pencil But he ain’t got no lead The dude talked a perfect story She was aroused by what he said The magic didn’t happen When she took him to her bed Although she had great talent She could not raise the dead The elevator was broken It did not reach the top There was no peak performance So in the end she had to stop Boy oh boy he sure was pretty It was a shame it was a flop He promised her a fountain But she didn’t drink a drop

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Vegter Papyrus

Date: 4/9/2019 2:48:00 PM

Wouldn't want to be him!

Heather Ober

Date: 12/22/2018 8:30:00 PM

This is hilarious! Had me laughing out loud. So clever and funny.

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 11/4/2018 11:27:00 PM

a very interesting and funny .

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/3/2018 10:47:00 AM

Poor guy!! That is a very disappointing feeling for us and them. Oh well. When the brain wants what the body can't give, it's a shame. I wonder what the problem was--mental perhaps? Perhaps he had a true love he felt guilty about? Your word choice is highly appropriate and funny!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2018 9:45:00 AM

So great! This was great fun!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2018 10:10:00 AM

Thanks!

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2018 6:29:00 PM

playfully poetic, great way of working your words. ;)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/6/2018 2:11:00 PM

Hi Richard, well, I have my laugh fest for the day on this one. Brilliant, I love the humour in this one. This has made my night. Now you know that I shall be giggling all night. Love it Richard. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 10/6/2018 5:49:00 AM

Hilarious indeed! Dear friend, I derive joy from your lines. You present poetry so easy indeed! Much love, Adeniji

Ralph Sergi

Date: 9/26/2018 8:35:00 AM

An ode to an unsung hero (ha ha) Great poem, Rick!

Marc Acrich

Date: 9/18/2018 5:03:00 PM

Very good, let me know if you want to read my racy poem , I have 480 poems but only two are racy so my mind is not in the guter well sometimes it is

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/17/2018 7:50:00 PM

LOL thats hilarious, loved the poem, and very well written.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/16/2018 10:29:00 PM

Nice little dittos that rhyme Richard, I have enjoyed each one. write on...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/17/2018 12:29:00 AM

Thanks Pixie.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2018 12:56:00 PM

Richard, ^WW^ is right a peaking performance... nicely done. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

Hugs back Eve. A prayer headed your way.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/14/2018 7:10:00 AM

A peaking performance is more like it, Richard...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2018 4:32:00 PM

Thanks for the visit.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/13/2018 2:04:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely naughty humor in your poem my friend. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2018 8:50:00 PM

Thanks Ravi.

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 8:32:00 PM

I love the word play here, Richard. I don't even think that blue pill would have worked in this case..lol Clever & witty...All the best...Charlie

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2018 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Charles.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/10/2018 7:25:00 PM

"She could not raise the dead" Oh my!! Sounds like his toy solider wasn't standing at attention. ;) This is soooo naughty, but so cute and clever. Made me giggle and blush. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2018 12:32:00 AM

What a sweet response.