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Peachy Day On a Nude Beach

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Fruity and Funny Limerick Contest

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin ~ 8/21/23

Don's girlfriend blushed the pink hue of a peach But she kept her body beyond his reach She firmly resisted Until he insisted "But that's why I brought you to a nude beach!"

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Terry Flood

Date: 9/5/2023 11:05:00 AM

Nothing quite like walking on the beaches looking at the peaches (in case they didn’t crack the US, that's a Stranglers quote). Congrats on your win, Lin

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:17:00 AM

Cute one Lin. Congratulations! :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/5/2023 4:13:00 AM

So cute. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/4/2023 10:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun beach write. Maybe a pink sand beach is where he needs to take her. Hahaha!!! Have a great day.............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 2:18:00 PM

Lin, a cute and funny one, congratulations on your first place win!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/21/2023 2:00:00 PM

T S Eliot once asked, "Dare I to eat a peach?" His poetic character was also on a beach... hmmm?... A grand limerick you have in this Lin. Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2023 4:51:00 AM

Dare, and you may succeed, Dare not, and an opportunity is lost. Thanks a lot, Jeff.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/21/2023 12:22:00 PM

Lol, you rose well to the challenge Lin, no luck needed for this one. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks a honey bunch, Tom. Limericks make it so easy to be a titch naughty.

Paul Bell

Date: 8/21/2023 10:06:00 AM

That girl knows her onions, and Don ain't unravelling her. In saying that, he does get to see her naked, though that might just be the tipping point.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/21/2023 5:51:00 AM

Ha good one Lin, indeed the punchline rests in your final line, hey is her left hand in the right place, don’t answer that question, his smile says it is, brilliant, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 7:06:00 AM

I'd better not touch that one.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/21/2023 6:20:00 AM

Oh he’s in for a home run no doubt, but only if he can keep his head, lol!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2023 5:59:00 AM

oh, David... you asked and then answered your own question. But here's one for you. Since he's smiling, do you think his right hand is going to be allowed near her body now? Thanks for your humorous comments. Cheers!