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Peaceful Night

Setting of the sun, The wind of the night bows; Peace within the stars.

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James Fraser

Date: 5/24/2009 11:05:00 AM

Another beautiful piece,James

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/18/2009 11:33:00 PM

Peace it is to stare at a night sky, it is one of my best times in life. -Boo

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/18/2009 1:29:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, I love the last line............Danielle

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2009 11:53:00 PM

grea imagery Raul.rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/14/2009 8:27:00 PM

Raul, you have such great talent. And I think your nephew inherited it. I read his tribute to you on this site and it was well-deserved. Awesome imagery for such a short work! Carolyn

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:37:00 PM

Nice haiku and great imagery. Love E.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/14/2009 1:54:00 PM

Very nice use of imagery in your haiku! Laura :)

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/14/2009 12:29:00 PM

Beautiful, Raul. The imagery is wonderful and the title is perfect! Love, Robin

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/13/2009 7:27:00 PM

The picture of the wind bowing is a powerful image. Serene nature.................Good J.O.B.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/13/2009 7:22:00 PM

This is so peaceful and calm..I want this feeling and a bottle of cold one and mind free. Good writing Raul.

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/13/2009 7:00:00 PM

Nights are very peaceful. This haiku is nicely penned. DN

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/13/2009 5:04:00 PM

Raul this is one of the better Haiku's that I have ever read - So peaceful - God Bless, MJ

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/13/2009 4:52:00 PM

Such a soft smooth read that provides a sense of comfort. Quite a good write! Michael

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/13/2009 4:47:00 PM

Very beautiful picture this haiku paints. :) "peace within the stars" just lovely! Great job. :) Amy

Date: 2/13/2009 4:24:00 PM

I love the serene feel of this poem. Nice use of personification for a creative view. Enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing! Karen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/13/2009 3:48:00 PM

Nothing like a star filled night. Made me smile Raul. Hope your night is filled with stars tonight. Laurie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2009 3:48:00 PM

Very nice picture painted in this poem, Raul. I'm enjoying reading your work!