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Peaceful Night

Setting of the sun,
The wind of the night bows;
Peace within the stars.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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May 24, 2009 at 11:05 AM

Another beautiful piece,James

February 18, 2009 at 11:33 PM

Peace it is to stare at a night sky, it is one of my best times in life. -Boo

Danielle Moreno

February 18, 2009 at 1:29 AM

Beautiful haiku, I love the last line............Danielle

February 14, 2009 at 11:53 PM

grea imagery Raul.rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 8:27 PM

Raul, you have such great talent. And I think your nephew inherited it. I read his tribute to you on this site and it was well-deserved. Awesome imagery for such a short work! Carolyn

February 14, 2009 at 7:37 PM

Nice haiku and great imagery. Love E.

February 14, 2009 at 1:54 PM

Very nice use of imagery in your haiku! Laura :)

February 14, 2009 at 12:29 PM

Beautiful, Raul. The imagery is wonderful and the title is perfect! Love, Robin

February 13, 2009 at 7:27 PM

The picture of the wind bowing is a powerful image. Serene nature.................Good J.O.B.

Christopher Higgins

February 13, 2009 at 7:22 PM

This is so peaceful and calm..I want this feeling and a bottle of cold one and mind free. Good writing Raul.

February 13, 2009 at 7:00 PM

Nights are very peaceful. This haiku is nicely penned. DN

February 13, 2009 at 5:04 PM

Raul this is one of the better Haiku's that I have ever read - So peaceful - God Bless, MJ

Michael Degenhardt

February 13, 2009 at 4:52 PM

Such a soft smooth read that provides a sense of comfort. Quite a good write! Michael

February 13, 2009 at 4:47 PM

Very beautiful picture this haiku paints. :) "peace within the stars" just lovely! Great job. :) Amy

February 13, 2009 at 4:24 PM

I love the serene feel of this poem. Nice use of personification for a creative view. Enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

February 13, 2009 at 3:48 PM

Very nice picture painted in this poem, Raul. I'm enjoying reading your work!

February 13, 2009 at 3:48 PM

Nothing like a star filled night. Made me smile Raul. Hope your night is filled with stars tonight. Laurie

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