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The tulips are pretty, on my bedside table in this quiet room; and I am seeking pity, because hospitals are gloom. As I lay here thinking, I hear that I almost died but I recall not a thing; except I was sinking, and I heard birds sing. I was in a place green, walking a forest path with many reaching vines; (Oh what does it mean?) and above the sun shines. It really is quite serene, and I just want to sink down into the earth; but there is a voice unseen, one known since birth. Mother is calling me, and I start to run towards her whispering voice; her call is a plea, and it seems I have no choice; then I am screaming W A I T ! And start to cry as I stumble past towering trees; thinking, is this my fate? (Time to take your pills, please.) I am laying in bed, not mine but a hospital room dark and lonely. (Why do I have to be fed?) There is a nurse only, and I am sinking back into a dream; I am walking among rows and rows of stones, lost I seem; in this place of bones. Here is my family, she is sitting on my bed weeping; my sister, Amalie. (They must think I am sleeping.) But why is it so dark? The doctor is talking, saying they did their best; then, I fly away a meadow lark, finally peace to rest. _________________________ April 12, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Peace To Rest Copyright Protected, ID 18-1012-425-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Best Rhyming Poem, April - July 15, 2018 Sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place

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Date: 7/13/2018 7:35:00 PM
oh my, you do sad SO well, Constance. This was a very well deserved win, my friend!! Happy Friday to you.
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Emotional, beautiful.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:59:00 PM
A beautiful poem of vivid, soulful and emotional imagery, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this excellently penned poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings-Dear Heart.
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Date: 7/12/2018 2:56:00 PM
Sometimes the afterlife visits through dreams. Very beautiful Constance! Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:22:00 AM
Another worthy winner Constance, sad but excellent rhymes!
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Date: 4/20/2018 10:52:00 PM
I have noticing in referring to condition of the dead... you accurately place them in the earth resting, am I reading into this correctly? "you want to sink down into the earth.' reminded me of sinking down into down comforter. I really saw picture you so beautifully expressed as a dream.bbn
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