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Peace

Fluff clouds shuffle graze high in the sky. Blue slices of Spring delight the eye. Spring fever casts a peace infused daze. High in the sky, fluff clouds shuffle graze. Smooth breathing is easy on Spring days. Content birds lift bright songs thru dawn’s rays to season mornings with notes breezy. On Spring days, smooth breathing is easy. Radiant peace glows on Spring’s themed earth. Nature vibrates with wondrous new birth. Splendid buds bloom peace in brilliant grows. On Spring’s themed earth, radiant peace glows. Spring props peace all around with pure touch. Our very souls lean towards Spring’s clutch with a joy peace filled prayers resound. With pure touch, Spring props peace all around. ... CayCay April 12, 2019

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Date: 4/13/2019 7:08:00 PM
Your poem has such amazing creativity in this different form, Cay Cay! I am really impressed and hope this does well in the contest! :)
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Date: 4/13/2019 4:42:00 PM
Very lovely, CayCay! Janice
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Date: 4/13/2019 1:45:00 PM
Hi CayCay, such a wonderful Spring poem, you have written a gem - With pure touch, Spring props peace all around - WOW - good luck in the contest - sure it will be judged for a win! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 4/13/2019 8:08:00 AM
So beautifully penned CayCay..I love the line: "Blue slices of spring delight the eye"..
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Date: 4/13/2019 5:05:00 AM
Blue slices of spring now there is an original line. Soon all the flowers will be dipped in skies blue, I love your poetry Cay, you amaze me today, Have a great day dear poetess xo
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Date: 4/12/2019 7:35:00 PM
Is this your first swap quatrain? If so, bravo, Caycay!! you chose the serene meaning of peace, which is so much better for use of imagery. Way to go, sweetie. I hope we both make the winners' list (mind is yet to be posted and I wish it had more imagery)
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Date: 4/12/2019 4:51:00 PM
enjoyed the joyful mood of this one, cay... spring comes alive with your spilled ink; marvelous!... huggs
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Date: 4/12/2019 4:19:00 PM
I expect this will do well Cay Cay. Hugs Rick
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Date: 4/12/2019 3:27:00 PM
Indeed we all await Spring with bated breath. After a long cold winter we need to see some color and feel a warm breeze. Good Stuff here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/12/2019 3:21:00 PM
Inspiring imagery that brings peace in the readers heart! Artfully done dearest, CayCay!
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Date: 4/12/2019 2:08:00 PM
CayCay You ushered in Peace with this poetic prize! Your style is smooth as silk!
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Date: 4/12/2019 2:06:00 PM
Wow CayCay, I am impressed! This form is a challenge for me, it takes too much time. You have mastered it beautifully. Your last stanza left me feeling uplifted! Gorgeous! I hope to see this a top winner!xxoo : )
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Date: 4/12/2019 12:36:00 PM
Yes we do lean toward spring. Nice pen
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Date: 4/12/2019 12:04:00 PM
Spring is certainly one of Nature's greatest wonders. Have a great day. Smashingly good poem.
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