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Paulette - 2

The cute coquette that I’ve just met - a sweet petite brunette is she. I sing her name: Paulette; Paulette - the cute coquette that I’ve just met! A date with her I aim to get so one day on one knee I’ll be! The cute coquette that I’ve just met - a sweet petite brunette is she. Jan. 10, 2022

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2022 7:16:00 PM

Congratulations! Love it!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/16/2022 9:34:00 AM

Love this! Your sweet imagery, very catchy! Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/15/2022 5:29:00 AM

A great teriolet with "cute coquette" - Beautiful! Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/13/2022 9:11:00 PM

Oozing vibrant charm of innocence!

Valsa George

Date: 1/13/2022 5:37:00 PM

Beautifully done ! Love the line- "A sweet petite brunette is she". Definitely she will yield .... :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/12/2022 5:21:00 AM

Oh, amazing writing... love it. A really great entry. God bless you, Love, Gina

John Lawless

Date: 1/11/2022 5:10:00 PM

You always make this troublesome Triolet form look so easy.....smooth, rhythmical, and enticing....great job

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/11/2022 2:40:00 PM

Nicely done to the form.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2022 3:07:00 AM

Love is blind. Loved the repetitions. Hugs.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/10/2022 7:21:00 PM

This is beautiful and very rhythmic verse. Good luck in the contest... Blessings to a new year

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2022 4:29:00 PM

This is so sweet Andrea. I could exchange Paulette to my granddaughters name, Cosette. Best wishes in the contest. I wish I had more time to write, but we are working to finish my husbands room. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2022 11:08:00 PM

yes, you should do that, and read it to her!!

Bill Baker

Date: 1/10/2022 4:27:00 PM

And a sweet triolet in poetry. Fun read, well written in form, Andrea. Hugs, Bill