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None will eagerly snatch you if you properly grasp detectors evading. You can't gather unless you utterly master discarding. You won't succeed until you scarcely learn the shunning. If, on either hand, you merely find every shrill outcry irritating. If you naturally shrink every sore spot, you will reluctantly yield everything. You were obliterated through fierce winds shivering. When will you leave, my chosen mate? Properly honoring.

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Date: 10/15/2021 2:01:00 AM
Pain is unavoidable. Be careful of the flu.
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Date: 10/14/2021 3:53:00 PM
Yes, you must be willing to endure the pain of growth to become better, that last line very thought provoking~
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