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POTD 7th Mar 2018

I trust you like the music video clip which enhances the poem

Like dark molten honey caressing her tongue and soul food for taste buds addicted to caffeine Coffee has its own excitation The book has lost its charm The fault lies entirely with the tree outside this cafe To its majestic being she gazes yet again Intoxicating her mind with the magic it casts Its sacred shades of green offers sanctuary - cocoons her A light breeze rustles leaves that seem to whisper enticing words articulating something in an archaic tongue Escapism into her fantasy world comes effortlessly A disposition for being alone - solitude her sacred space Interrupted suddenly by a dog barking - The momentary moment of peace shattered snaps her back to reality Well at least the tree still offers her solace Till the comforting feeling dissipates as a strange awareness dawns She is being watched Smouldering eyes so black boring through her cuts her to the core A feeling of having experienced this de`ja` vu moment mystifies Most disconcerting is this almost pleasurable sensation Embarrassed and puzzled she pulls her wrap protectively around her Shielding her from eyes that linger To cover her shyness she stares down at her book Then to the TV on the wall Startled she observes it has morphed into an old movie screen Static flashes across an old Hollywood Classic rerun Most bewildering - she does a double take - Unbelievable The actors in black and white Are her… And … this stranger Unable to tear her eyes away from the screen she watches in utter fascination - this person who sits across the table from her Is the leading man in the movie He… She...They Incredulously are in the throes of a passionate love scene? She staring shamelessly into his eyes Welcoming his wandering hands? He thrusts his tongue into her mouth eliciting a drawn out sigh that intensifies into a sonorous moan arousing his demands What is happening here? Like a finely tuned instrument he plays her - her resonance - his pleasure His sole aim to pluck her strings evoking the sweetest sounds A musician exerting the right pressure to produce a high note of pure exhilaration must know how to use his fingers To locate the true locus of ardour Questing fingers slip under her short skirt A sharp intake of breath as they run the length of skin in search of excellence to acclaim his prized opus through the essence of his masterpiece and the high ecstatic notes Only he can achieve And Boy! - Does he know how! Raw intense undulating pleasure like waves over waves Wash over her - a nostalgic fragrance of bygone days linger But logic interrupts fantasy with a mentation They have already experienced this exhilaration From a past life? Lovers that have lived in each other? A rare phenomenal - no words needed As he saunters over to her table - she smiles…
POTD 7th Mar 2018 Music:"Teach Me Tiger" by April Stevens

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Date: 6/20/2018 9:00:00 AM
I love old movies. I enjoyed reading this one again. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/1/2018 1:47:00 PM
I AGREE...WOW! Sensational writing, Maria. Re: Tim Ryerson...he was a poet who wrote here on this site for a long time...a very special man. Elaine
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Maria Williams
Date: 5/14/2018 6:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Elaine, both for the visit and the WOW, Lol I appreciate it....Maria xxx
Date: 4/22/2018 2:04:00 PM
Wow...
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:26:00 AM
Lol, I see that you are suitably stunned George, thanks the the visit....Maria xxx
Date: 4/9/2018 9:56:00 AM
Truly brilliant and sensually romantic poetry my friend. Hot , hot and inspiring verses that can send the reader happily down memory lane.. Evident of a very gifted poetess, letting loose and giving the reader depth, beauty,romance and passion. A fav..
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/9/2018 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert, I really appreciate your sincere and inspiring comments my friend. ....Maria :)
Date: 3/22/2018 10:57:00 AM
Truly an invigorating narrative, Maria!! I was spellbound from start to finish. "His sole aim to pluck her strings evoking the sweetest sounds...To locate the true locus of ardour" Love it! Very well done. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/1/2018 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Laura, I am so glad that you liked this. Thank you for the support and encouraging words, I am very flattered....Maria xx
Date: 3/16/2018 9:41:00 AM
I... uh... I... I'm speechless... well... almost speechless!!!! Can I come over to play house? PLEASE! I'll be polite... I promise! I'll be the lover and you could be my lovee!!! OKAY??? I'm quivering... love, Happy Jack XOX (excuse my naughtiness, but it is all your fault you know!)
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Date: 3/18/2018 12:24:00 AM
Oh you must be hooked this is the second visit. Vibrations of the Highest Kind lol. Thank you Jack, you were born to be 'naughty'....Maria xox
Date: 3/15/2018 11:32:00 AM
hi Maria This is an incredible writing that it make old man feel young.so it is romantic and hot but beautiful.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/21/2018 10:05:00 AM
Yes you are correct. feeling old is to be old...correct
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/15/2018 10:45:00 PM
Come now you are not old? You are only as old as you feel and the mind never ages unless we let it.Thanks Muhammad, I'm so glad that you really liked this. I'm happy for the visit and fine comments always....Maria
Date: 3/15/2018 7:56:00 AM
Well you know this is the third time I read this, and still it burns... Lol! You're sure is one amazing talented poetess! Yes totally an exquisite piece of art... Hugs and smile :)
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Date: 3/15/2018 10:43:00 PM
Really? Lol. Thank you Kina, you have expressed all the things that I want to hear in a comment, how you as the reader feels, does it appeal? etc etc. Thanks always for the support, I really appreciate it my dear friend....Maria xxx
Date: 3/14/2018 9:15:00 AM
"Like dark molten honey" Holy crap! you sure have my southern parts smoldering dear Maria... oops, sorry! That was naughty! My popper started popping... oops there I go again! ANYWAYS IT'S YOUR FAULT!!! But keep 'em coming, sweet lassie! Piles of love stuff, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 3/15/2018 8:51:00 AM
I gave you fair warning Jack that it was smoldering so I hold myself blameless - Ah well! I guess can I can take the blame. I'll try and pile on the love stuff just for your benefit Happy Jack - I need not tell you to keep happy as I know you always are...Maria oxo
Date: 3/13/2018 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations on having this poem honored with POTD Maria. Sensationally sensuous! : )
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie for the visit and excellent comments always my friend. We were in Waikiki Beach about two weeks ago, weather was not the best though. Keep well....Maria xxx
Date: 3/13/2018 12:36:00 AM
Phew! A better erotic kiss wont easily be found. One can feel it. Grrrr Btw. Thank you for your awfully kind sentiments on mine. I was touched and regard you as a friend
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 3/15/2018 9:13:00 AM
Fire brigade on the way! I remember bush fire sort of. Im glad that youre updated about whats going on here. I feel like screaming at the wall.of frustration because not one damn reporter publishes anything about this. Its another cover up by the media or its slanted. If they want a Pulitzer Prize I could show them a.few places which boggles the mind. Anyway tbanks again
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/13/2018 1:48:00 AM
Call the fire brigade to put out your firie Jannie. Lol. Thanks for visiting my page and appreciating the poem. Unknown to you we do worry about you and your situation. My Haiku 'Bush Fire' was the first time you visited. We have a number of South African friends in Oz so they keep us up with the situation, particularly in Joberg. In fact, by chance we met a couple of friends we hadn't seen for years on the plane to Hawaii a couple of weeks ago. They did well for themselves in Oz . Keep safe...Maria
Date: 3/12/2018 5:58:00 AM
Estupendo, Maria ... Congratulations on POTD ...
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Date: 3/12/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and comment Probir. I do appreciate it...Maria
Date: 3/11/2018 1:15:00 PM
I can see why this became poem of the day, Maria. Exquisite. I love how you aren't afraid to write sensual material. Beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thanks so much Eileen for your enthusiastic comment. Your poems are just as uplifting sensual and I love them too. I guess us females should not be afraid to show ourselves. I trust you liked my prequel before this one -'Seduce me in Black and White. Maria xxx
Date: 3/11/2018 9:07:00 AM
Here you have combined your talent for vivid sensual poetry with the intriguing question of former lives. The wonderful old song: ‘Where or when’ would relate well here. Very well done Maria
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Date: 3/11/2018 8:44:00 PM
Thank you Geoffrey for your appreciation. It is an honour having you comment on my page. I trust you also liked the prequel ',Seduce me in Black and White'. I will check out your song, perhaps I could use it in another submission..Maria
Date: 3/11/2018 3:41:00 AM
I am going to have to run for a water hose! This poem is so hot! Sensual. Lava-like. What a write! Wow!
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/11/2018 4:17:00 AM
Or else call the fire brigade Caren. Thank you for your visit and lava-like comment ...Maria
Date: 3/10/2018 9:12:00 PM
Very cool and hot...LOVE IT.
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Date: 3/10/2018 11:31:00 PM
Lol, Susan Ashley is the 'Hot and Cold' sensual writer on this site. I bow to the best. Did you read' The Daughter Of The North Wind Sings In Soprano'? Thanks Leanne for the visit and commenting, I truly appreciate it....Maria
Date: 3/10/2018 3:01:00 PM
Katharine Hepburn, Bill Holden, Kirk Douglas, all of them in black and white, tremendous passion ,magnificent write
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/10/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you Pashang, all the movie greats, so great to see....Maria
Date: 3/10/2018 7:31:00 AM
Ooh lala! Love where this one takes us! And yes, the clip and its music was great! I love the tension at the beginning of the poem and the surprise at the end! Congrats on much deserved POTD!
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/10/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, so glad that you enjoyed it ....Maria
Date: 3/8/2018 5:45:00 PM
Omg Maria still at it I see;) great write my Friend very well done!
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:18:00 PM
Still at it, yes indeed. Lol. I am considering putting on a contest, using these last two poems of mine as an example, will think some more on it though.Thank you Brenda for dropping by, yes POTD, I was pleasantly surprised....Maria
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/8/2018 5:45:00 PM
Oh my and potd really great job you go girl!
Date: 3/8/2018 3:55:00 PM
Wow, Congrats Maria:)
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:19:00 PM
Thank you Tahira so much for dropping by and lovely comments. I really appreciate it....Maria xx
Date: 3/8/2018 2:02:00 PM
Hello Dear Maria, Sorry for not reading this one earlier. I am very glad I did!! Congratulations on the POTD honor for this very excellent write. The music is great too. Superb Work for sure, and a definite FAVE too!! Best Always, Gary
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/8/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thank you Gary my friend, better late than never as they say.I know you have been very busy though. I enjoy reading your comments and thank you for your FAVE. All the best and do keep well, won't you!...Maria
Date: 3/8/2018 1:18:00 PM
Congrats on potd
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/8/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thanks Si...Maria :)
Date: 3/7/2018 6:09:00 PM
Congrats on POTD Maria..
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/7/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you for the return visit and congrats Joseph, I really appreciate it....Maria
Date: 3/7/2018 5:19:00 PM
Omg this is gold! Vivid imagination! Fav.
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:49:00 PM
My weight or yours Martin? Thank you so much for the visit and fave my friend. Glad that you like it...Maria
Date: 3/7/2018 12:18:00 PM
I came to comment but once I saw your poem is POTD the only thing I can do is to congratulate you! Truly deserves the honor dearest Maria! xxx
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/7/2018 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much my dearest friend, I really appreciate your sweet comments and support always ....Maria xxx
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