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I died yesterday. In my sleep. went to bed and was dead. just like that. I floated about the room. saw my body lying down. did not bother me a bit. People came and went. Some were quiet, some wept. flowers, a few cards. I waited by the bed. there was nothing much to do. No work, No office. relatives mattered not. nor friends. on the other side there was none of that. no clothes, no jackets, no hat or wallet. just a presence. next morning I woke up, like nothing at all! I was back in the turmoil of life. relatives and friends all over me! I have to get back to work. not now. that’s when I get better. But that brief passage gave a new meaning to life. To everything I thought was mine. was not mine at all! Just a big lie! life is just a presence. sometimes in a body. and for most part without any form. Just remember that! What are you worried about? you are just a presence in passing, from physical to ethereal.
Honourable mention Written 19/11/2021 Soul Poetry contest Robert James Liguori sponsored

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Date: 11/21/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/21/2021 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Robert! Thanks for sponsoring and for my placement.
Date: 11/20/2021 7:44:00 PM
Strange that I too had such dreams when I watched the whole scenario as a dispassioned passive spectator ! After such dreams when we wake up to reality, we begin to think of the transience of earthly life. Yes, life on Earth is so fleeting! What stays for ever is our ethereal life. Great poem, Krish !
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/20/2021 11:15:00 PM
Thanks Valsa. Interesting to know, you share similar views and have had similar experiences. It is a true glimpse into what it all means to all life on earth! not just human life.
Date: 11/19/2021 4:23:00 PM
Death really makes people think out of body experience.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/19/2021 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Death is the best way to understand life.
Date: 11/19/2021 3:33:00 PM
Wow! This poem is truly philosophical and deep. "life is just a presence. sometimes in a body. and for most part without any form" - these lines reveal the most significant realization about our existence. A precious poem, Krish. Btw, the first line shocked me. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/19/2021 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Mala! I often think about the relationship every creature has had with this world, and the significance. and my own. The concept of maya becomes clear.

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