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parting peace

As the last sun sets and life ebbs away, ugly words and deeds flash across his mind and he feels ashamed. Bitter tears flow into the mire of squandered time he can't redeem. His eyes dim as he begs forgiveness. God hears - At last Peace. 21/01/19 Any Theme Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest : sponsored by Charles Messina F F I series 25 dim hex blog : Brian Strand

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Date: 10/11/2019 3:15:00 PM
Beautiful and brilliant, Wendy. A Fav. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. ~Mark
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:02:00 PM
That's so kind of you,Mark. I don't know why so few are entering poems for these blogs. I've been educated in four previously unbeknown poetry forms already and have enjoyed the challenges.
Date: 1/27/2019 3:24:00 PM
wow, yours is absolutely brilliant. One of my favorites here!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:03:00 PM
That's a compliment indeed! Thank you,Andrea.
Date: 1/27/2019 12:22:00 PM
Wendy, beautifully penned, and congratulations on your placement !
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Dear Heart.
Date: 1/27/2019 9:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Wendy! You did a great job on this form! Peace be with you :) Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Charlie
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you,Charles. This was a new form for me.
Date: 1/26/2019 1:46:00 PM
Very moving Wendy, excellent. :)
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:04:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. I shall hopefully dwell on my own words in the years ahead!
Date: 1/21/2019 7:46:00 AM
A fav; went to my list immediately Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:05:00 PM
That's very kind of you,Caren.
Date: 1/21/2019 7:27:00 AM
A touching poem, Wendy.
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/11/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thank you,Line. If only we would live each day so that the regrets would be few!