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Park Bench of My Childhood

I went back recently to the park of my childhood, Where I once sat on a worn old bench with my father . . . And as I walked the winding path I saw the old bench, Down by the flowing river and I caressed the wood and wept; Stroking all the beautiful flaws, it whispered to me of memories, And I was taken back to another time when I had felt the warmth; I rested on the bench fingering the worn surface with love, Wondering how many have caressed this old wood, weeping. ________________________ August 29, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/Park Bench of My Childhood Copyright Protected, ID 08-704-648-29 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Sense of Touch, sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Judged 2015 Third Place

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Date: 2/17/2021 5:36:00 AM
Oh my... so emotive and deep dear friend. Nostalgic images of that old bench I felt as if even I was able to see it. Amazing poetic talent, apt for the contest theme Constance. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/17/2021 7:36:00 AM
Ani, thanks for visiting my old poem and for the nice comment and compliment _Constance
Date: 9/8/2015 9:09:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:01:00 PM
I love it, Constance. BIG congrats for your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:01:00 PM
you may have inspired something in me!
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Date: 9/7/2015 9:20:00 AM
Lovely, BW. I could feel the old bench, your memories and your heart.
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:48:00 PM
Back to congratulate on your win, B.W.! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/6/2015 12:14:00 PM
touched by your nostalgic mood of your piece and its beautiful images, constance.. thanks for supporting my contest and warmest congrats!
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Date: 9/6/2015 8:36:00 AM
As I completed reading, the Old Park Bench, I realized that I had just finished watching Scene 1 from the nominated Academy Awards Best Motion Picture of the year....And it is the best ..Congratulations.....
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Date: 9/6/2015 7:48:00 AM
Very lovely imagery Broken! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:45:00 PM
BW, I enjoyed reading this moving piece. It reminded me of childhood memories that I made at the park. As always you have penned a well written poem:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/30/2015 7:30:00 AM
Beautiful write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 8/29/2015 9:23:00 PM
B.W., your work always inspires me. Hugs Eve
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