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It was "The Cape" in early June Along with her sister Vie They had strolled down past the dunes Under a cloudless sky She could taste the ocean salt On a swirling southern breeze In new dresses mother bought Instead of their dungarees On a rock, the eldest in blue Matching ribbon in her hair Going on 'bout a boy she knew The youngest pretending to care But sailing on a green grass ocean Drifting in a pirate's dream A young girl with a swashbuckling notion Stealing gold from a Spanish queen Looting up and down the coast Black patch over one eye Sailing with Blackbeard's ghost Skull and crossbones flying high Then suddenly, back in a blink Captured by mother's call A girl pirate dressed in pink Her saber, a red parasol an original poem by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful win! I love stories like this and I really enjoyed this one Daniel. A favorite poem and a (7) from me. Just Awesome. Just loved it. Sharon
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:20:00 PM
Congrats! on the win Daniel...great work...^WW^
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/9/2016 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Winged Man. I appreciate your kindness. You are very thoughtful.
Date: 7/8/2016 4:52:00 PM
Daniel, back to congratulate you on your nice placement in 'the red parasol' contest! Sandra
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Date: 7/9/2016 6:59:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Sandra. You are so sweet. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 7/8/2016 9:17:00 AM
Daniel, I love this one, you have a true gift...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you Laura. I really appreciate your kind consideration and your warm comments.
Date: 7/8/2016 9:09:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, Daniel; so different and well written.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Faye. I appreciate your time, comments and friendly visit.
Date: 7/8/2016 8:39:00 AM
Daniel, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Mrs Eve for letting me play along. I appreciate your consideration and all of the time it takes to put on these contests.
Date: 6/18/2016 8:20:00 PM
Love it!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/18/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thank you. This one was fun to write. I am happy you enjoyed it:)
Date: 6/18/2016 3:19:00 AM
This is a unique take on the painting, Daniel:) All the best:) Glad to know that you're doing better:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/18/2016 7:33:00 AM
Thank you and yes it is good to be feeling better. Just trying to get my rhythm back.
Date: 6/17/2016 9:59:00 AM
You put a lot of imagination into this, Daniel, in going beyond the what we see. Nicely done, and all the best for the contest. Hope you are feeling better. Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/17/2016 1:04:00 PM
Yes ma'am, I am feeling some better but am far from back to normal. I did however, take a few liberties with this one. Thank you for your continued support.
Date: 6/15/2016 1:00:00 PM
Hi Daniel, this is a fun poem with a cute ending. I read below about your physical ailment... I'm sorry to hear you're in pain. Hugs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/17/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Becca for your friendly visit and your well wishes. I am getting better.
Date: 6/14/2016 7:42:00 AM
Your imagery is amazing. Love it Daniel
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/17/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Kelli. I really appreciate your support and your friendship.

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