Parallel Universe

In a shifting plane, beyond A parallel universe Do I even exist here Am I here in love? Russell Sivey

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/10/2012 6:22:00 AM

Very interesting piece you have here Russell. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2012 12:27:00 AM

I had to see this one after reading Don Johnson's set of couplets. Everything fits together well in this great example of a dodoitsu. Parallel universes were a favorite subject of the late Rod Serling. Many Twilight Zone episodes were based on them.

Don Johnson

Date: 1/9/2012 11:37:00 PM

Parralel U the parrallel of this plane in time, where Russell sits within his mind, move better sideways down the bore, to the doorway, almost for, depart from it, just sideways, go quickly, watch the door, myriad of slideways not here, no, never more...

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/9/2012 6:02:00 PM

Yes a different plane- Jesus said we would go in and out and find pasture- we do now have a taste of the after life (if we know Him)- so assuredly there is. Blessings on a great write, Brenda : )

Tim B

Date: 1/9/2012 3:15:00 PM

I love a good pondering poem, excellent questioning.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/9/2012 3:13:00 PM

Intriguing piece, Russell. Thought provoking indeed : )