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Parallel Universe

Sometimes I feel like I'm in a parallel universe, That somehow feels distant yet close. I've been here before, I think………. I'm not totally sure , It looks familiar but then again this so foreign. I look in the mirror and I see my twin but, we're not close. We are strangers, we move alike but are unison is slightly, off, I am intrigued by the woman trapped, in the mirror, our life and house is not what it appears to be, this is what goes on in, my universe, also known as the back, streets of my mind. 9-24-19

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2019 11:10:00 AM

Your poetry is so heartfelt Alexis, forgive me my friend but I am packing part of the day and most of the night and don't get much free time - congratulations on your win Alexis, this write is mysterious and I found it exciting especially clever were the last 3-4 lines. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/2/2019 6:39:00 AM

Belated Congrats!! my friend...Superbly executed sis...Bobby has a crush on you lol...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/2/2019 7:08:00 AM

Hi WW, Thanks for the visit and comment. Shhh everyone doesn't know Bobby has a crush on me lol!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2019 3:44:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/26/2019 7:49:00 PM

I really enjoyed this intriguing poem Alexis. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2019 4:25:00 PM

Alexis congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!

Silent One

Date: 9/26/2019 4:00:00 PM

Sometimes i feel like this too.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/26/2019 4:10:00 PM

Hi Silent, You always host great contest. Thanks for my placement in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2019 8:01:00 AM

I liked how you painted the other side of the mirror..that is sometimes dark and haunting..well said, Alexis..all the best.

Chris Green

Date: 9/25/2019 7:11:00 AM

This was incredible my friend. Kind of dark and kind of creepy but so very cool. Best wishes in the contest

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/25/2019 1:57:00 AM

A touch of the twilight zone in your verse Alexis. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/24/2019 10:18:00 PM

Nice turn for the contest. I wish you well and blessings to you

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2019 9:21:00 PM

Well done Alexis. I like how you ended this with the back streets of the mind :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/24/2019 9:41:00 PM

Hi Heidi, Thanks for saying that. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate that you stopped by. Have a good evening my friend:-) Alexis

Bobby May

Date: 9/24/2019 9:17:00 PM

That's why I don't have mirrors, interesting write it has started my mind working!! It's great for the Silent Ones contest Alexis!

Alexis Y.
Date: 9/24/2019 9:37:00 PM

Hi Bobby, I'm sure you have a mirror and the guy looking back is easy on the eye. In all seriousness , I enjoy your comments my friend. Your poetry is already amazing. If something I wrote can contribute to one of your gems, I am delighted. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis