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Paradise

On a summer day you said to me, let us go to the hills and see the rising sun paint the snowy peaks pink, listen to the surging streams talking to the stones. To the blue hills we went, the snow was gone, the streams were silent. The hills sent us back sad. On a winter day you said to me, let us go to the desert and see the fluid mirage tremble at the camels’ feet, listen to the winding winds talking to the dunes. To the brown desert we went, the mirages had vanished, the winds were silent. The desert sent us back sad. On a rainy day you said to me, let us go to the sea and see the silver moon ride the crests of the waves, listen to the foaming breakers talking to the beach. To the azure sea we went, the wave crests had fallen, the breakers were silent. The sea sent us back sad. On a balmy evening you said to me, let us go to the lake and see the pine trees shape shadows on the water still, listen to the gliding swan talking to the ripples. To the green lake we went, the trees were gone, the swans were silent. The lake sent us back sad. On a gloomy night you said to me, let us go to paradise and see how cheerful people make happiness, listen to the songs of nature soaked in bliss captivating the hearts serene. Nobody could tell us, not even the internet, where the paradise was. Sad, I said to you, let us invent one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/24/2017 3:45:00 AM
I loved your poem Subimal. It is a real classic! Superbly written and delivered with a fantastic ending! Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2017 4:00:00 AM
Thank you Connie for encouraging words of appreciation. Truly, we have to discover and design our own paradise. I hope you would agree.
Date: 7/23/2017 5:14:00 PM
I just adore this poem, Subimal, very melancholy and poignant, but ultimately hopeful and romantic. I am a big fan of ambiguity, and I love the many places this takes me ... I must add this to my favorites! Wonderfully written with much creativity, thought, and emotion ... congrats!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/24/2017 12:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg. It's wonderful to receive comments like these. Actually, our search never ends but we don't very often get what we search, and so we have to create things of our own.
Date: 7/23/2017 6:38:00 AM
Well done, Subimal.
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, Lin, for encouragement.
Date: 7/22/2017 8:52:00 PM
Very creative-where you took the topic! Please do enter my next contest & if you would like editing assistance & advice about where to send your work to be published just soup mail me. Congrad's Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 7/22/2017 11:58:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I would like to do that.
Date: 7/14/2017 4:35:00 AM
Great!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. We need to invent something sometime.

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