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The Paradise of Heaven does exist; the thought of it dwells in the human soul. Since time began, most cultures did insist- there is an afterlife we all extol. The feeling we belong to God is strong; the Paradise of Heaven does exist. Come afterlife, we'll go where we belong; the thought of this continues to persist. There we'll remain- as noted in the midst of scriptures written, gathered from the past; The Paradise of Heaven does exist- the Word of God was captured there to last. This human, inborn consciousness is real; belief and trust- for us can't be dismissed. Most faiths acknowledge this, together feel- the Paradise of Heaven does exist. March 27, 2023 ~1st Place~ Contest: Writing Challenge - P Sponsor: Constance La France Word Chosen: Paradise - No. 3 Judged: 03/29/2023

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:21:00 AM
Sandra, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Love the image .
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