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Pandora's Kiss

"Pandora's Pearls"

Crystal tears drown under the best velvet distinctive feel
A Ghostly feel that leads into a clear diamond road
I found myself seduced down an Ancient Silk Caravan path, 
There she hid behind the golden stones she built around her heart.
She was a white gem against the deepest night
She spoke Latin words upon this dreamy sky
Her eyes were deep and the size of my mother’s midnight pearls
I fell into the stare of her bedroom eyes
Wishing to taste the sweetness of her coconut milk fragrance. 
She lowers the cloak to reveal the beauty in her black pearly eyes
Raven hair under her soft sensual disguise
Her lips redder than the violet rays of the sunset

She buried her beauty, and then exposed what’s under the cloak
Soon, her body turned into rot and bones
Her fingers pointed towards another path,
A rugged road of stones and pearls
I took a blade and press it against my skin, 
Concealing my life shut, after she revealed all my forbidden sins
Her lip, her eyes, her pearly grin, my last vision as my blood drew thin
A sweet kiss of death, falling into the eyes of Pandora’s Spell

by;PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2016 7:29:00 PM
An exquisite poem, PD. This is my second read. The first time was when it was used as an example of an Epic poem. I pondered and meditated on certain aspects of the poem. Now after reading it the second time, it reaffirms my belief that seduction to beauty in it's varied forms can make a soul go astray. It's hard not to fall sway to the siren song and lose yourself. A beautiful piece of prose. Love you always and forever.
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Date: 1/16/2015 7:22:00 PM
Beautiful eloquence in your word usage and style. Very imaginative and colorful poem down to the kiss of death. :-)
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Date: 11/8/2014 2:34:00 PM
Exquisite creativity....Pandora is a great theme to write on, in fact I have just written a poem about Pandora which I intend to post in the near future. The imagery is captivating and seductive. I'm under its spell! /x/ paul
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:13:00 PM
oh sorry wrong room. i think the bellboy must of given me the wrong key. BwaHaHa the monkey sent me.
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Date: 8/13/2014 10:52:00 AM
Hello Linda, A very well-done epic style poem. Usually anything that carries "Pandora" in the title is an immediate attention getter for me. It certainly captured mine. Your work exhibits exquisite and compelling imagery, and I find the diction employed to be quite enchanting. I look forward to reading much more of your poetry. I can tell from the number of poems you've listed that you've been at this for a while. Again, most excellent work!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:22:00 PM
The moment I saw the title I knew in some way this would be interesting. Pandora...what a symbol. Your imagery is so...colorful. Vast. I really do enjoy your expression. :)
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Date: 9/16/2013 10:12:00 AM
I can well imagine her saying- Allegro Legato Crescendo Vibrato. Lovely poem.
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:41:00 AM
EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING LINDA SHOWS THE SOFT BEAUTY WITHIN
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Date: 8/7/2013 2:29:00 PM
This is the first poem I read of yours and I was very impressed.
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Date: 6/21/2013 12:35:00 PM
This is a great poem I loved reading it. Well maybe you could email me and talk a get maybe become freinds?
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Date: 6/17/2013 6:45:00 PM
very interesting write Linda I really enjoyed this poem xoxo love Lorenzo
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Date: 6/13/2013 3:59:00 AM
I enjoyed the sense of mystique in this poem Linda. Nice one, well written!
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Date: 6/1/2013 9:36:00 AM
Well..Ole Pandora eh P D she's wild and wiley by the looks of things..' You just got to keep the good part of you safely away from her; and catch the better part of you after she's gone..' L O L.. Oh and thank you for the top spot win dear girl.. Joe..)
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Date: 5/23/2013 6:19:00 PM
Hi linda, I really like your elegant and ausomely descriptive way of choosing your verses in pandora's kiss, I really enjoy the mystique of greek mythology, have a nice day.....kris
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:00:00 PM
HI, Pd, I changed my entry for you. Too many people were saying nice things about cherry blossoms. But I have lots of DOGS amongst my more recent haiku and I hope you hate the one I submitted. haha
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Date: 4/22/2013 7:24:00 AM
I was completely captivated. I was there with you. Thank you for this beautiful piece of art.
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Date: 4/19/2013 11:47:00 AM
Very deep and extraordinary. It's like a glowing ember. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:35:00 AM
So deep with feeling....
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:17:00 PM
this is a well deserved top 100.hope you are having good days.take care.
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Date: 4/11/2013 3:45:00 PM
I have heard nothing so enthralling at the beginning and then dip towards a saddened end like this one. i love the description and I could visually those most stand out parts. Great work, very well done, one of the best!!
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:47:00 PM
I found myself amidst a scene of wonderment on the Silk Trail. Cloaked I am against the Mongolian wrath's nature they call Summer. Dust devils lacerate, as they have done whilst I have roamed. He to me with our Black Pearly Eyes, never despise, though we cry. We are one, we are Taras Bulba's children, Ostap & Andriy, for we are we, and she will become thee. Oh my, this could be a story. Apologies for drifting PD. I love this piece, makes me wander. Have a koolio weekend, James xx
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Date: 4/1/2013 4:35:00 PM
Wow. Nice poem. It's deep, unique, twisting, and too many things in one. I find it spookish too. Btw, please notice me if you are gonna make other contests. Thanks.
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Date: 3/30/2013 9:24:00 PM
Hello my ever dearest sis! How are you? I hope you're doing well & at zenith of good health & your love ones as well. I'm quite early at soup today. I'm stopping by to read once again one of your superb & stellar masterpieces. I sooo much adore your poems and I'm embracing them tight every time I read them. Thank you so much again for sharing & for everything! Once again, I'm stopping by to greet you and ur family a HAPPY & BLESSED EASTER SUNDAY! GOD BLESS! Lovely Hugs! love much forever, Leo
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Date: 3/30/2013 10:12:00 AM
wow! i lovee the concept and twist you made. I'm really sorry of your loss, Linda. and you are auch an angel to still continuing the contest and even gave us congrats greetings.. what a great heart you have, dear. I wish only the best for a pure heart like you. xoxo
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Date: 3/29/2013 3:41:00 PM
WHAT IS THIS??? Whoa. Seriously loved it! Always, laura
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