Palm Tree Sonnet

Stiff pleated fronds in concert rise
to wax under the April sun 
and trill their canticles begun
in verses jade that they comprise.

Chartreuse of thorny branches splay
a tumult to belie the grace
that on display they interlace
like rose stems on a breezeless day.

Atop the thatched denuded bole
gush fountains cast in cardamom,
an opalescent diadem
that glistens on the mossy knoll.

In thus exuberant array 
do cloistered peacocks mime ballet.

1/20/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
Cozart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Thanks very much, Eve.
La France Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Dale, congratulations on your great placement in John's contest with this wonderful Sonnet, well done !
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Thanks, Constance.
Nance Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:40 AM
You write with words that are not frequent in my vocabulary, but the feel of your poem and content clues make even the unknown wording a beautiful collection of inspired growth. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much, Casarah.
Gentry Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Thanks much, Susan.
Ashley Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 1:48 PM
I am enchanted by the thrill your lush imagery brings to my imagination, Dale. So stunning, especially your last line. A masterful creation! Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 1:59 PM
Thank you very much, Susan.
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:24 PM
You knew how much I loved this sonnet, smart of you to enter it, quality gets rewarded again, congrats Dale!
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Thanks so much, John.
Smith Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Knew it was a top contender all the time, congratulations Dale...
Cozart Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie!
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:23 PM
congrats on your fine win, Dale. Well done.
Hamilton Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Congrats Dale on your win, this has amazing imagery, and your vocab is off the charts (again), loved your unique word pairings eg opalescent diadem, cloistered peacocks, so good!
Cozart Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Thanks very much, John!
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 3:44 PM
So beautiful!!! and the ending with the peacocks miming ballet. What a clever and cute image. Just loved it.
Cozart Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!! Glad you liked it!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 2:53 PM
You have such a fine pen Dale, love your deft use of words and imagery here; a fave!
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Thanks so much, Keith!
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January 22, 2018 at 9:54 AM
This is exquisite, Dale! You might not believe it but "palm tree" was next on my muse list to work on ... I live where there aren't any, but plan to move soon to where there ARE, and I just love the moods they inspire. Wonderful Sonnet, friend, and so much superb imagery and phrasing! :-)
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thanks for your comments. I really appreciate it!
Gentile Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:21 AM
This is beautiful, Dale and a wonderful subject for a Sonnet !!
Cozart Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thanks so much, Mike!
Allison Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:22 PM
such a beautiful spring poem Dale and as ever I love your wonderful use of colour:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Thanks, Jan, I'm glad you like it!
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January 20, 2018 at 12:11 PM
- Beautiful, makes me yearn to spring a cold winter day Dale :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Me, too, Anne-Lise! Thank you!
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Lovely work Dale, well done...
Cozart Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:18 PM
Thanks very much, Charlie!
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