Pale Shelter

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Love, to you
nothing more than washed away graffiti, 
once dripping along the 
mismatched bricks of this worn facade
where tattoos mean forever . . .
even when they fade

A clutched lamppost, 
scarred and dented, a fake shade of green
meant only for leaning
and illuminating handbills advertising
high rent in the slums, 
supports me

As I look beyond the littered gutters 
needing a good rain to wash away the past
where you left me standing again,
uncovered, exposed . . . 
winter called and thinking it was you, 
(it had the same chill affect) I answered

I thought you were it, that thing that I needed, 
not a leaking roof draped in a blue tarp,
but the east to my west
when my direction pointed north
until you ran south
taking it all with you

Beyond my control,
you laughed at love, (cackled)
thought you knew better,
cut holes in my umbrella
and then prayed for rain,
while my life was already drowning

You gave it and took it 
and with my happiness in tow
on that one way street
where “No Vacancy” signs were misspelled,
drove away, drove away from me,
tail lamps and your heart . . . never braking


11/12/19
Written for the Pale Shelter Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sands Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win Chris! You are on a roll! I am happy for you :)
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. : )
Neumann Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations on your superb win. This poem is amazing. Kind wishes, Kai
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Thanks so much Michael. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Ligon Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Congrats, Chris. I knew this one would be a winner! Very well thought out.
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so very much Juliet.
Lane Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 8:06 PM
"cut holes in my umbrella and then prayed for rain" that's cruelty to the nth degree. Happy to share the honor with you, Chris.
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:48 AM
Thank you so much my friend. our kindness is always a gift to me.
Na Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Chris
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thanks again Greg. I appreciate your kind thoughts
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December 7, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Chris your narrative approach on this was brilliant, with using words with such color and street depth its one of my faves!! Lonna
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so very much Lonna. I am happy you liked this one.
Adams Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 1:51 PM
I told you this would shine at the top...well done Chris...congratulations on your first place win :) hugs
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Yes you did. : ) Thank you for your kindness and the faith you have in my poetry Sandy. I appreciate everything you do my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Well done Chris, you tell a sad tale, with vivid descriptions only a master storyteller can do. Congrats on a top win!
Green Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 8:45 AM
Thanks so much John. I am honored your enjoyed this one enough to recognized it in your contest.
Ligon Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Wow, powerful verse!
Green Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Thanks so much Juliet. I appreciate your visit today
Sands Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:10 AM
This is a superbly written poem with all the descriptions and the aching of heartache is so deeply felt. It is hard to read this one and not cry. It reaches the reader strongly. Well done Chris ! :)
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:34 AM
I appreciate you saying so Heidi...now if will only reach the judge. : ) Thanks my friend
Y. Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:47 AM
WoW! Chris, You did a great job with the contest theme. This is a slam dunk! This is a top contender. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have terrific day my friend:-) Alexis
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me always.
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November 14, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Awesome write... sure it's a winner. Blessings to you, Love, Gina
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so very much again Gina for always being so nice to me.
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November 14, 2019 at 12:22 AM
A winner in my book. Good luck in the contest, Chris.
Green Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Thank you so very much Caren
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Talk about pale shelter---You have written the primer on t! Bravo! As the Rolling Stones once sang, 'Gimme Shelter!' :) gw
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:29 PM
Wow, I wish I would have thought of that. One of my favorite songs. Thanks so much my friend. I'm glad you liked this.
Na Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:53 PM
wow this is deep, your depictions are outstanding. The depth of the pain show the reader your feelings perfectly. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest. A small note: In the poem you mentioned gutters. I just finished my work for the day and today my job was cleaning out gutters. 13 houses to be exact. Have a great day.
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Ha, I didn't mean those gutters but I know what you mean, just cleaning out my own is a chore. : ) Thanks so much Greg. I appreciate your comment today.
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November 13, 2019 at 3:33 PM
I've got an ending to add to your poem: And in hindsight finally realized how you weren't good enough for me... Well penned, Chris.
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I like that but I'm not really sure I have realized that yet. : ) I appreciate you Line, you are always so nice to me.
Cholt Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Beautiful, deep, sad poem. I love the fluency and the layered descriptions that permeate throughout this piece. Best wishes for the contest.
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 3:33 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by to read and for leaving such a nice comment for me. I appreciate your visit.
Adams Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Wow. Talk about an emotionally painful poem ... I could feel this one my friend ... well penned poem that is sure to shine at the top of the winner’s circle :) hugs
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:28 PM
Sandy, your kind comment has brought the biggest smile to my face. I wasn't sure how some might take this because it is not my normal flowery love poetry. I appreciate you my friend.
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November 13, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Wow. Potent gripping write, the winner for me. xomo
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I am thrilled you came by to read this one and even more thrilled you liked it so much.
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November 13, 2019 at 2:14 PM
That is heartbreaking!
Green Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Thank you Christine. I am glad you felt this one, that theme is what I striving for. I appreciate your kindness and you taking the time to read this.
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