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Pale Shelter

I am never sure! The pale of moon sings To the absence of birds Her rings breathe With waves of sensibility Undulating before my imperfect stare Through tears of solace rhythms Without you I am never sure? Her solar voice lamenting In the empire of purple vastness Lost in love.......and lost in love Beam softly in my sorrow Burn radioactive With arctic filled veins My pain In command The paradox portend My love That has no end But ends I witness under the pale of moon Once more.... I am never sure? November 12, 2019 Pale Shelter Poetry Contest Sponsor John Hamilton

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Date: 12/7/2019 5:42:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Lonna
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 12/7/2019 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Poet Friend............... Lonna
Date: 12/7/2019 1:50:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one Lonna, thanks for your entry and congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 12/7/2019 5:58:00 PM
Thanks John! Your contests are always enjoyable and a lot of good work! Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 6:56:00 PM
wow, this is AMAZING. I will be surprised if this does not place high!!!
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:42:00 PM
Hello Andrea! Coming from you I am totally flattered. Thank you so very much for thinking so. Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 10:28:00 AM
Beautifully crafted for the contest Lonna. This should do well. Best wishes my friend,.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/16/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Chris. Live your comments. Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 8:54:00 AM
Couldn't tell you for sure...is it never ending or never more...Nice one
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Date: 11/16/2019 12:31:00 PM
Great slant Arturo. Thanks Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 8:34:00 AM
Lovely poem, Lonna.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/13/2019 7:40:00 PM
Hi Line! Good to hear from you. Thanks for the kind words. Lonna
Date: 11/13/2019 4:50:00 AM
Terrific write, Lonna. Liked this part especially: "My love That has no end But ends"
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/13/2019 7:34:00 PM
Caren thank you for your kind words. Nice to hear from you. Lonna
Date: 11/12/2019 10:24:00 PM
Wow... Shakespeare... great stuff. Ann
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/13/2019 7:33:00 PM
I am so flattered by your comment. Thanks Ann! Lonna

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