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Painting By Numbers

A shade of clear caresses red dabbed upon each aching edge a sweetened birch lies ever near await mere embers to appear In holy rest her amber hue a roseate glow paints such a view gentle strokes do pass and glide pure color beats and breathes inside With light and shade a vision lives in moves and shapes a feeling gives a pensive air floats through each brush as passion seeks her loving touch

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Date: 9/24/2017 7:38:00 PM
Great write Tim! Such an beautiful depiction of the art :) Have great week :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:23:00 AM
I can imagine your beautiful painting, Tim, great write:)
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:49:00 PM
Your poem glows Tim with masterful strokes romance, beauty and poetic bliss. A sexy write, I love this line; 'gentle strokes do pass and glide pure color beats and breathes inside', spectacular!
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Date: 9/19/2017 1:30:00 PM
- Awesome poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/19/2017 1:13:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Tim! A master stroke
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:13:00 PM
Very sweet, I read in this 2 meanings, be interesting to see if any are right! :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 7:41:00 PM
I like these two lines a lot..." a pensive air floats through each brush as passion seeks her loving touch... Enjoyed your poem friend..A peaceful to you and yours
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Date: 9/18/2017 5:49:00 PM
i must agree, this is a lovely word-painting...i also paint, tim.. huggs
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:35:00 PM
Can't wait to see what you write when you have to over shade some colours and mix and match....Lovely write Seren....
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:33:00 PM
Nature's creation is a beautiful canvas with all the live movements.. beautiful description, Tim : )Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:47:00 AM
Tim Creation burning from the pen to the brush...sequentially forming beauty and depth. Makes me want to take up painting!! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:42:00 AM
I love this one Tim. Beautiful :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:28:00 AM
I think we had the same math teacher Tim...well done
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:38:00 AM
You painted a beauty--yes-the numbers add perfectly, Tim!
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:20:00 AM
With romantic words like these, it's your touch she'll be seeking. A beauty, Tim. You're limiting yourself on those numbers..ha
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