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Pain of Death

Pain Of Death "Down, down, down into the darkness of the grave Gently they go, the beautiful, the tender, the kind; " Edna St. Vincent Millay Pain of death is boundless- smolders deeper than the hottest hell, searing the mind and heart- past pleasures to charcoal turn. Endless death snuffs good life away- hot, burning tears fuel the flames aglow for loved one gone- no more to cherish, hold. May 21, 2020 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Etheree Poetry Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Judged: 05/24/2020 Syllables: 1, 2, ,3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:40:00 AM
Sandra, wonderfully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2020 1:59:00 PM
This is a heartfelt poem. "Hot, burning tears fule the flames aglow", truly describes the pain of loss of a loved one. Congratulations on your win Sandra :)
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:52:00 PM
Nicely done, Sandra, so true.Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/21/2020 6:43:00 PM
Sandra, you so aptly described that haunting, empty feeling in the soul when a loved one departs this mortal coil. Best wishes in the etheree contest, my friend ~ John
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Date: 5/21/2020 2:42:00 PM
Beautifully composed Sandra, Good luck in the contest. Tom
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