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Pain Can Be Silent

to feel tears falling and understand their meaning... the night is lonely 5/30/19 contest writing challenge 5, May 2019 Senryu poetry contest sponsor, Dear Heart

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Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/1/2021 3:06:00 AM

Very moving. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2020 9:59:00 AM

Emotive work. Congrats. Sara

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/2/2019 5:48:00 AM

Super great poem.. I can feel the emotions in this well-written senryu. :) -JWE

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/4/2019 5:55:00 PM

Hello Fredrick, yes I agree pain can be silent. Some people cry in loneliness. have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2019 3:40:00 PM

back with my congrats on your well deserved win.

Constance La France

Date: 6/10/2019 11:04:00 AM

Frederic congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2019 1:40:00 PM

So poignant. I really like this one.

Silent One

Date: 6/2/2019 7:56:00 AM

very true... sadness is always silent.. but the pain speaks volumes..

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2019 8:07:00 AM

Great one Frederic! :)

Catie Lindsey

Date: 5/31/2019 6:24:00 AM

Awesome poem, Frederic. :-) Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Catie

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2019 5:51:00 PM

I'm adding this moving piece to my faves, so few words say so much:-) hugs Jan xx