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I turn back the pages ...all the tattered pages ... yellow and brittle and fading with time and I find myself weeping an ocean of moments Tears are like the quiet drift Of petals from some magic rose And grief yet flows from the rift Of unremembered skies and snows" in time I found love ... he was my prince- my everything we had so many dreams for our future but, in the book of life his destiny was written and he became a name engraved in stone my heart was shattered in a thousand pieces- broken but, I discovered a strength within and I picked up every shattered piece of my heart and put them carefully in my pocket ... in time I glued together ... all those jagged pieces _____________________ April 30, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/pages tattered Copyright Protected, ID 04-1350-652-30 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France (24 lines total, chosen stanza #3) Written for the Standard contest, Choose Your Form sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 05/13/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/18/2021 2:27:00 PM
what a touching piece Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2021 6:36:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, love _Constance
Date: 5/14/2021 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. I love it. Life is filled with many tattered pages. Have a blessed day/weekend..................
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Constance La France
Date: 5/15/2021 7:53:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 5/14/2021 5:34:00 AM
A poignant write Constance, Congrats on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2021 8:33:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the inspiration and the contest, and for my great placement, and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate, peace _Constance
Date: 5/13/2021 4:36:00 PM
A poignant lovely piece Constance. Congratulations on your First Placement! Blessings xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2021 8:33:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, love _Constance
Date: 5/13/2021 8:57:00 AM
Powerful imagery of heartbreak and healing. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2021 1:43:00 PM
Juliet, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations, love _Constance
Date: 5/13/2021 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance, I enjoyed reading your beautifully written verse. Hugs, John
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2021 1:43:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and for the compliment, peace _Constance
Date: 4/30/2021 2:18:00 PM
So glad I stopped to read this Constance. A masterful treatment of the contest and a thought provoking write. (i was gonna say ... "cancel the contest!! we have a winner") but....
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2021 7:07:00 AM
John, thank you for the compliment and the fun ending, serenity _Constance
Date: 4/30/2021 1:32:00 PM
Inspirational poem Constance ! With the strength you express can only have a flow on effect for others, Well written, enjoyed much :)
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Date: 4/30/2021 1:40:00 PM
Paris, thank you for visiting and for the compliment, peace _Constance

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