PACKING UP HOUSE

Packing up house
I do not like
Much, rather fly a kite,
Or go on a hike!
We lived in our first home 
Almost forever,
But in the last six years,
The third and most traumatic
Emotion in life,
Was packing up and moving.
It’s all about enduring!
This home was where
Our children grew up,
Graduations, celebrations,
Happy moments and sad
Where our parents died,
Where our hearts sadly sighed
Where we consoled one other 
And cried.
The empty nest syndrome was next,
A huge home, echoed emptiness,
So, we moved, not quite ready
To be retired, 
But encouraged and inspired,
All was in a hurry and flurry,
From the old to the new,
It was just a move, right, 
But in hindsight,
It was terribly sad.
 hubby tried hard
To cheer me up, took me out
To dinner and shopping,
I missed our pool, and 
Competing who was best
At belly flopping.
Hubby even bought me
A labrador puppy,
But I did not like our new house.
Although I loved its whereabouts,
Opposite a farm,
With cows, horses and sheep,
A calming sight,
To wake and see at morning light.
I unpacked with a heavy heart,
We realized we had
To make another fresh start.
Our son found a real english
Like cottage with a garden
That i could envisage making
Into a dream, 
In my minds eyes i drew
Up a mystical fairy theme
Four years we have,
Lived here, but our son and daughter
In-law, suggested we move into one
Of their cottages, 
Oh no, another move,
Yet another garden to
Create and improve.
But we will have our 
Three-year-old grand-daughter,
Living near,
Making our decision
Ever so clear!
So guess what, I’m packing again,
But this time, 
We have won first prize,
This move we feel, is wise!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 2:19 AM
I can understand your feelings. Moving away from an accustomed haunt is always painful and taxing. Packing and unpacking and setting up things once again is indeed a headache. But I feel your moving to a new home won't disappoint you as you are coming into greater proximity with your adorable grandchild. Then an open farm where cows graze is an added attraction. So proceed without apprehensions. All the best to you and your family.
Kauffman Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Dearest Jennifer, how beautifully you express the emotional upheaval of moving as a metaphor for the roller coaster of life - the closing of chapters and the opening of the new chapters. This poem is so real. I pray this latest move will bring you joy and continue to help you feel it was a blue ribbon in your life! Sending you blessings on wings of comfort, dear friend, as you start spring - a new beginning!
Godwin Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Oh, honey, your heart on paper, I feel you, emotion comes off the page (screen.) Four years have passed? Really? The new house may have represented a new chapter that painfully stated all that ended in the prior chapter. Moving has affected me greatly, always moved even as an adult it went on. If you wish, see 'cardboard boxes' and 'about this place.' I'm glad you feel 'content' now, my word, but your write relays such and content is such a powerful way to feel. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Dear Jennifer, The bittersweet essence of change and the emotional journey of shifting houses are both explored in your amazing poetry, especially as they relate to family and memories. It highlights the happiness of family ties, especially with a grandchild, while also reflecting on the longing for a cherished former home and the difficulties of adjusting to new surroundings.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 8:46 AM
What a wonderful "PACKING UP HOUSE" write. You told a great story. We moved many times as a child, than I have as an adult. My husband said, never again. Yes, never again. Good Luck in your New Home.... I took a week off the computer and now way behind. Have a lovely day writing away..................
Proxenos Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Paula my dear friend i am way, way, way behind, and I aim to take one way away, this weekend. love and hugs, Jennifer.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 5:05 AM
A superb interesting relatable poem, old homes have so many memories attached, you have depicted and expressed that superly in rhyming wow! Kudos! Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
Baker Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 6:21 PM
I can really relate to this poem, my friend. Many moves and memories but we see one more in our future. We need to be closer to someone in our family, 150 miles is the closest in my family. and 60 to the nearest relative on Sara's side. Good luck, Jennifer. My thoughts and prayers are with you two. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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July 13, 2025 at 1:20 PM
Sounds like it’s the right move Jennifer. It will be lovely to be near your family. Wishing you all the best… Beryl
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