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Pa

Young lad sitting on your lap Listening to a concert on the radiogram The rest of the family around us in the front room I could never thank you enough for instilling me with a passion for music I hated learning the violin But wish I had persevered with the piano Boniface, scar face The holidays that we had thanks to Concorde and your hard work with English-French, French-English translations Ironic that Concorde too is now laid to rest You were always so well dressed Happiest in your blazer and ties Even when we were walking the downs and staying in youth hostels Reliving the formative years that you felt you never had As you enthusiastically play your violin in our school orchestra I can’t have made it easy for you with my behaviour… Daydreaming… Hyperactivity… And failure to study The things you and I used to talk about Your grin Your laugh Taking you for a curry A pleasure you enjoyed too infrequently But there was also your darker side… When you lost your temper… Your intolerance to… Noise… Cars… Dogs… Football… And popular music It always made me smile when, As a grandfather, You so enjoyed kicking a football with your grandchildren Thank you for The music The walking The pride you had in us And for your love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/9/2009 3:02:00 AM
Nigel, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/7/2009 2:46:00 AM
Wonderful tribute, Nigel. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:28:00 AM
beautiful, congrats on the featured poem,
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Date: 10/5/2009 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful dedication. Love the last stanza. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writng! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on your amazing feature this week. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:34:00 AM
This honest look at a grandfather...wonderful poem, Nigel! Congratulations ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nigel. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 10/4/2009 11:31:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/26/2008 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Nigel, I am really pleased you liked my poem for my cousin Annette, she is fighting cancer, it was a very difficult poem to write so I really appreciate your comments. I really like this poem Pa and will look at others you have written. All best wishes love Ann.
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Date: 10/15/2008 5:15:00 AM
Oh what a lovely tribute to your pa. Fathers are so worthy for children. There are times we cant even imagine about them. Your deep love for your father is reflected whole through the poem. This is an excellent piece full of cherishing memories. For me, a very touchy write! Love, Chitra
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