Pa

Young lad sitting on your lap
Listening to a concert on the radiogram
The rest of the family around us in the front room

I could never thank you enough for instilling me with a passion for music
I hated learning the violin
But wish I had persevered with the piano

Boniface, scar face

The holidays that we had thanks to Concorde and your hard work with
English-French, French-English translations
Ironic that Concorde too is now laid to rest

You were always so well dressed
Happiest in your blazer and ties
Even when we were walking the downs and staying in youth hostels

Reliving the formative years that you felt you never had
As you enthusiastically play your violin in our school orchestra
I can’t have made it easy for you with my behaviour…
Daydreaming…
Hyperactivity…
And failure to study

The things you and I used to talk about
Your grin
Your laugh

Taking you for a curry
A pleasure you enjoyed too infrequently

But there was also your darker side…
When you lost your temper…
Your intolerance to…
Noise…
Cars…
Dogs…
Football…
And popular music

It always made me smile when,
As a grandfather,
You so enjoyed kicking a football with your grandchildren

Thank you for
The music
The walking
The pride you had in us
And for your love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 9, 2009 at 3:02 AM
Nigel, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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October 7, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Wonderful tribute, Nigel. Congratulations on this well deserved feature of the week. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie
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October 6, 2009 at 7:28 AM
beautiful, congrats on the featured poem,
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October 5, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Beautiful dedication. Love the last stanza. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writng! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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October 5, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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October 5, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Congrats on your amazing feature this week. Love Light Truth Patty
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October 5, 2009 at 7:34 AM
This honest look at a grandfather...wonderful poem, Nigel! Congratulations ~ Carrie
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October 5, 2009 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nigel. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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October 4, 2009 at 11:31 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
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October 26, 2008 at 7:13 AM
Thanks Nigel, I am really pleased you liked my poem for my cousin Annette, she is fighting cancer, it was a very difficult poem to write so I really appreciate your comments. I really like this poem Pa and will look at others you have written. All best wishes love Ann.
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October 15, 2008 at 5:15 AM
Oh what a lovely tribute to your pa. Fathers are so worthy for children. There are times we cant even imagine about them. Your deep love for your father is reflected whole through the poem. This is an excellent piece full of cherishing memories. For me, a very touchy write! Love, Chitra
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