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All I want is red in bed
I don't think it's much to ask
red sheets, red hair, red hot love...
will my heart survive?




For "Red" contest sponsored by Francine Roberts.

Copyright © George Aul | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 22, 2011 at 11:54 AM

Congratulations George, on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 5, 2011 at 10:11 AM

Glad to see this one on the list, George. A big congratulations to you! Luv, Andrea

February 4, 2011 at 5:22 PM

Cute writing and wonderful win. congratulations. Love, Joyce

February 4, 2011 at 5:17 PM

George, congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness in this entry.

February 4, 2011 at 3:10 PM

Hi George - Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

February 4, 2011 at 1:20 PM

Witty write George! Congrats on your well deserved win--kashinath

February 4, 2011 at 10:56 AM

Hello George, Wow, now I see why this is a winner. Congratulations George on your red hot win! Made me smile, very witty indeed As Always, Shar

February 4, 2011 at 10:36 AM

Many congrats on your win in Francine's contest George....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 10:10 AM

Well, I know one blond who is smiling because of your win, George. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 4, 2011 at 8:12 AM

Bravo George.. congrats on your big win in the RED contest with this exciting entry luv... enjoy your top ten sweet success my friend.. with luv..

February 4, 2011 at 6:22 AM

George, the heart may not survive, but what a way to go! Good to see you in the top 10. Enjoy. Agape, Moses

Francine Roberts

February 3, 2011 at 11:32 PM

congrats on your 5th place win in my contest George with this wonderful entry

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2011 at 12:18 AM

Oooh la la, VERY nice. Could have been in spicy contest too. LUv, Andrea

February 1, 2011 at 4:21 PM

Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like winning material to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

February 1, 2011 at 3:25 PM

Hey George, I have the red sheets and the passion. Would you settle for a blond? Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

February 1, 2011 at 2:11 PM

Very funny and creative write on the thme of red, george

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