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Over the Moon

He curls his lithe frame around mine.
All arms and legs, a fluttering heart
As a little bird’s, frightened but brave.
I kiss him, he tastes like oranges,
fresh strawberries, and courage.

I smile the sun into his green eyes,
Braid starlight in his curls, lick salt
From his skin, the shore our bed,
Lapping waves our spectators,
Soaking us until he curves his back
In roaring bliss. I carry him
Over the moon into the sun.

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April 5, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/7/2017 12:27:00 AM
Wow! What a beautiful piece, Darren. Sensually sweet. Great write.
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:38:00 AM
Sensual indeed, isn't it ;) Thank you Eileen!
Date: 4/6/2017 3:01:00 PM
- A lovely and romantic poetry - A tastefully kiss ... sweet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/6/2017 1:06:00 PM
Way to keep this vivid description 'PG' and in lines with the rules. I sure hope his lithe little frame didn't melt amid the solar flares you abandoned him in :p It's gorgeous poetry, sheriff. Masterfully penned.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 1:23:00 PM
I think it's even PG-13 :D And hahahaha about melting his lithe frame, well, those waves lapped at uss, so it was well balanced. Thanks my friend :)
Date: 4/5/2017 9:18:00 PM
You are a master poet, this was so beautiful.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Art, happy you like it!
Date: 4/5/2017 8:15:00 PM
Great imagery in this one, Duir! I am such a sucker for romance! Beautiful mate.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:27:00 AM
Need a bit of romance in my life Budgie, if only in my dreams :)
Date: 4/5/2017 7:20:00 PM
So beautiful! I love that last sentence. A 7.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:26:00 AM
Heh, yeah, I must say I am happy with that sentence too, thank you :) Thank you for the 7.
Date: 4/5/2017 5:50:00 PM
Deep connection of shared bliss Darren, and you write it so well. Beautiful! 7 ; ) Fave!
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:25:00 AM
Aww Connie, very happy with the Fav and the 7, thank you :)
Date: 4/5/2017 5:36:00 PM
Imaginative wizardry with the pen, as your words describe ecstasy on the beach. Emile.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:25:00 AM
It does doesn't it, Emile :) I am happy you like it.
Date: 4/5/2017 4:35:00 PM
And all is right in the world. Good Evening Darren. Your words are breathtaking. Honestly. You have shared freely once again. We readers thank you. May tonight be a good night. Well done entirely.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:24:00 AM
Good evening Lisa! I am glad you like this little poem :)
Date: 4/5/2017 3:14:00 PM
A lovely love Darren...
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thanks Charlie :)
Date: 4/5/2017 2:57:00 PM
You are making me get carried away too!!
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Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 3:01:00 PM
Cool isn't it Jean? ;) I love writing these dreams!
Date: 4/5/2017 2:49:00 PM
I carry him over the sun into the moon...Ahh..so beautiful Darren..So beautiful...A fave. AND HAPPY TO SEE YOU RE HERE WITH US.
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Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. And yes I am feeling a little better today :)
Date: 4/5/2017 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful write Darren, sultry, I'm blushing ;) xomo
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Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 2:11:00 PM
Hehe, thank you, mo :)
Date: 4/5/2017 1:56:00 PM
Very beautiful love poem my friend.
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/5/2017 2:04:00 PM
Yes, I agree
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Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I just keep writing these kind of poems till one day they will happen, dreaming is important :)
Date: 4/5/2017 1:34:00 PM
Sensual, warm and beautiful my friend. There is always a comforting aura that flows from your words when you write love poetry. This is amazing.
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Darren White
Date: 4/5/2017 1:38:00 PM
Glad you like this. To me you are a master of this kind of poetry, and I am just a student, but I love writing this very much. Thanks my friend :)
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