Get Your Premium Membership

Outside My Winter Window

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Constance La France.


Written, December 06, 2023

Poetry/Monorhyme/Outside My Winter Window
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1602-910-06
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Bird Snow GIF - Bird Snow Christmas - Discover & Share GIFs | Christmas  tree drawing, Christmas gif, Christmas animated gif

I woke up to find swirling snow, the wind howling with gusto; trees swaying and bending to and fro, snow covering streets, parks and each meadow. In the dawn the snow draped trees were aglow, dancing snowflakes twirled high and low; sometimes- they were fast and then slow, oh, I found the storm an enthralling show. Outside my window is a weeping willow, and the storm shook her with each blow; but she survived the snowflakes endless flow, yes, there were moments I thought she would go. It was quite the winter storm fandango; I even saw a bird dressed up for snow !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/7/2023 11:04:00 AM
Lovely Monorhyme poem.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:51:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate
Date: 12/7/2023 8:47:00 AM
A truly lovely winter Monorhyme Constance, Belle
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:51:00 PM
Beryl, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate
Date: 12/6/2023 8:10:00 PM
Love it what a joyful fun-filled poem : )
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:52:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate
Date: 12/6/2023 3:54:00 PM
lovely in every sense of the word...beautifully constructed rhymes along with some delicate images (draped trees were aglow). I got a kick out of the last two lines...'the winter storm fandango." Clever indeed. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:52:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and nice comment, appreciate

Book: Shattered Sighs