Outside My Window For Contest

A million shimmering lights twinkling in the moonlight 
paint their glittering shadows across the blue lagoon, 
as upturned dancing candles’ hot flickering fingers
curl to beckon me beneath the whispering waters.

Two swans; lost in their embrace, interlaced with shadows;
serenity in motion, but not a ripple made.
Patrolling borders as one, parading their passion   
as if no-one is watching, together forever.

But the vista disappears as harsh tones fill my ears
and my new panorama now slides away from sight;
the truck which bore my tableau pulls away to reveal
in it’s glory, the old view; my neighbour's dull back yard. 

Bill Lindsay 

September 12th 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rycroft Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Well done x I love it x congrats wendy
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:45 PM
congrats Bill. You have great views and a great capture of them. Curtis
Lindsay Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks everyone for your uplifting comments; my view is as boring as described, I therefore imagined what I would like to see and went from there .. ;)
Lawless Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 9:34 AM
DAMN....follow that truck....find out where that picture was taken....GO THERE!!!! Well done....loved the twist at the end. We must seize what gentle moments as we can...then let them pass. CONGRATS on the win....well deserved.
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:03 AM
Well done x congrats x Wendy
Tor Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 2:41 AM
A well deserved win Bill! Congratulations!
Cheema Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:55 AM
A paradoxical write! Congrats Bill!
Muideen Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Congratulation on your win. Excellent.........A.M.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Very brilliant take on the theme Bill! Congrats on first place win!
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:58 PM
Hi Bill, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
Godwin Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 8:45 PM
A very pretty and creative poem, Bill. Congratulations on your well-deserved win ... CayCay
Terry Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:37 PM
Wonderful twist, Bill. You had me wishing for that same view right to the end. Congrats on your first place win. :) Janece
Inman Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Bill, great write. Mixing ad based dreams with reality. Love it.
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Such fabulous imagery Bill I can see why this got the top spot - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Promise Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Great image - A mirage before reality struck again, revealing your neighbor' backyard. Good write and good luck in the contest.
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