Outside My Window

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Outside my window is mostly all trees of green but the birch are tipped with hues of gold and the maples are stained with red and I see the gulls in circled flight gliding, soaring up then down _________________________ September 13, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Outside My Window Copyright Protected, ID 20-1286-429-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (8) sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/15/2020 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Constance. Your descending verses are like a falling leaf and I love the colors at the end of the first three lines. All the best my friend!

Constance La France
Date: 9/17/2020 8:28:00 AM

Sam, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _Constance

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/13/2020 8:51:00 AM

love the beautiful images you penned here...fall is my favorite time...

Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2020 10:00:00 AM

Jeanne, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate _Constance