Out of My Sight Out of My Hands

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they're rolling him away in a wheelchair down the hospital hall out of my reach cutting the cord promising to bring him back they're rolling him away his future in their hands leaving me in silence alone with my fears wallowing as i wait with nothing but hope AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on September 11, 2018

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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 9/12/2018 9:00:00 AM

BEEN THERE. HOPE IT ENDED WELL, GREAT PEN.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 9:02:00 AM

Stay tuned. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. I know I am not alone. Line xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/12/2018 4:24:00 AM

Well penned but, that would be so hard of a wait for a Mom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:17:00 AM

For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/12/2018 2:09:00 AM

i absolutely love this one. A fav for me. made me cry for it reminded me they wheeled my dad away for tests. Out of my hands out of my protection. He was gone not long after that. thank you for writing it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear kindred spirit. Line xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/11/2018 1:49:00 PM

You are expressing what no one else can. This is utterly important.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2018 6:04:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.