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Out of My Sight Out of My Hands

they're rolling him away
in a wheelchair
down the hospital hall
out of my reach
cutting the cord
promising to bring him back

they're rolling him away
his future in their hands
leaving me in silence
alone with my fears
wallowing as i wait
with nothing but hope



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thayer Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:00 AM
BEEN THERE. HOPE IT ENDED WELL, GREAT PEN.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Stay tuned. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. I know I am not alone. Line xx
Kiser Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 4:24 AM
Well penned but, that would be so hard of a wait for a Mom.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:17 AM
For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Mcguire Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 2:09 AM
i absolutely love this one. A fav for me. made me cry for it reminded me they wheeled my dad away for tests. Out of my hands out of my protection. He was gone not long after that. thank you for writing it.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much, dear kindred spirit. Line xx
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 1:49 PM
You are expressing what no one else can. This is utterly important.
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
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