Out of My Sight Out of My Hands

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they're rolling him away
in a wheelchair
down the hospital hall
out of my reach
cutting the cord
promising to bring him back

they're rolling him away
his future in their hands
leaving me in silence
alone with my fears
wallowing as i wait
with nothing but hope



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Posted on September 11, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/12/2018 9:00:00 AM
BEEN THERE. HOPE IT ENDED WELL, GREAT PEN.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 9:02:00 AM
Stay tuned. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. I know I am not alone. Line xx
Date: 9/12/2018 4:24:00 AM
Well penned but, that would be so hard of a wait for a Mom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:17:00 AM
For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.
Date: 9/12/2018 2:09:00 AM
i absolutely love this one. A fav for me. made me cry for it reminded me they wheeled my dad away for tests. Out of my hands out of my protection. He was gone not long after that. thank you for writing it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear kindred spirit. Line xx
Date: 9/11/2018 1:49:00 PM
You are expressing what no one else can. This is utterly important.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2018 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.
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