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"OUR WORLD" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 13 JUNE 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Our world, a holy world and an evil world is Where the best and the worst of people one may find People willing their own lives for others to give While others kill for don't have a heart that is kind! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 June 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 6/14/2017 9:35:00 AM

Dear Demetrios, so glad to have you and your philosophies back on board - you were missed - Your quatrain is so poignantly representative of the turmoil of today which you have not only pointed out so well but also described in so few words ...Maria PS - We visited a beautiful Rose Garden of Peace in Japan of which I have written an ODE to. It's 'A Rose by any other name---, I thought of your lovely garden at the time.

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/13/2017 7:56:00 PM

Lovely quatrain ... Fair and foul have always been in the world ... Sensitive souls suffer in the swirls ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/14/2017 5:31:00 AM

So good to receive your visit my friend, Probir!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2017 12:07:00 PM

- Yes, there is a lot of evil in the world and cruel actions - But there is a lot of love too, but we do not see it in the news, television or newspaper .... we are not talking about love ... but we are talking about evil - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/14/2017 5:31:00 AM

You so right my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much! Hugs!