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Our November Neighbour

Robin, says 'how do' as I rake the leaves- later,whistles a warm thank you

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James Fraser

Date: 11/22/2009 1:39:00 PM

Brian, what a delighful piece, it made smile. Thank you for sharing this little gem >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/21/2009 6:18:00 PM

great cinqku!! I was riding by the creek today and almost ran a sparrow over hiding in the grass. he was glad to get away.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2009 7:26:00 PM

Such a beautiful scene u have created in this poem today Brian.. vivid and expressive too... thankxxx for always entertaining the Soup family... especially me.... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/20/2009 6:06:00 PM

I am impressed with your ability of using different forms of poetry. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comment on "God's Rich Garden". Caroline.

P Sheart

Date: 11/20/2009 3:11:00 PM

Such a sweet picture Brian! The chickadee's are here. -7. I put out the seed everyday! They really need it in this cold! Take care Love Light Patty

Elaine George

Date: 11/20/2009 12:56:00 PM

The Robins have left my sancuary; I won't see them again until spring arrives. The Blue Jays and Cardinals are still here brightening up a grey day. Lovely Cinqku. Thank you for sharing, Brian. Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/20/2009 8:30:00 AM

What a happy poem for a cold November morning! ~Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2009 3:24:00 AM

Interesting idea put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/20/2009 1:45:00 AM

Bought a smile to my face and a chuckle to my heart...I used to be facinated watching Robins hunt worms...strictly by ear, you know?... Gotta' try this form ...VERY effective...2-3-5-6-2. right? Have a good weekend, Brian - Tim

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/20/2009 12:57:00 AM

Ha, this one is great Brian. Love the imagery...Raul