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Our Love

Our love is aged like fine wine Like comfortable slippers you keep It warms the toes on cold winter nights Fits snuggly the shape of your feet He voices my thoughts before I speak Two become one in every sense Our love is kind and sometimes patient Each day we value the passing hours Allowing each other required space I’d hate to wake up and not see his face We often overlook each others shortcomings Building up one home and the love we share

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2018 10:04:00 PM
beautiful poem
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Date: 12/11/2018 10:04:00 PM
beautiful poem
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:31:00 PM
Smile ~ "You Have Mail, 'Beautiful Lady!'":) ~
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Date: 12/12/2009 10:30:00 PM
To have this you are truly lucky
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:37:00 PM
I can feel your hearts beating in this verse Audrey, it's beautiul >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 11:17:00 AM
Absolutely, Poignantly Beautiful ... Loved This Write ... Oh, Kiddo, Check Your Soup Mail ... MoonBee
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:48:00 PM
Beautiful and loving poetry from your gifted pen.. to know a love like that... awesome.. thankxxx for your nice comments on my poetry tonight.. glad u enjoyed during this holy and happy season ... blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:30:00 PM
What a lucky one you are to have a love like this...a love where you fit together, where you feel so comfortable and safe. A lovely poem, Audrey, beautifully written. And thank you so much for your kind comments on mine. Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:34:00 PM
Beautiful, you caputre love so well in your words. When I read your poem I feel at home. Nice work!
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