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Our Life Our Choice

Here we are, within form contained, which dark, feral desires have stained, so we choose, without an excuse, to mindfully change our heart’s muse, that God’s love and light be ingrained.

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Date: 10/23/2023 12:01:00 PM
- You are absolutely right ... lovely poem, S.V. :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:34:00 PM
Thank you, dear Anne Lise
Date: 10/23/2023 9:12:00 AM
Very nicely penned Seeker, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Joseph and for the placement
Date: 10/20/2023 11:05:00 AM
I like the philosophical questions you pose in your poetry, very layered meaning in this, especially like 'mindfully change our heart's muse' - much to ponder in that~
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Date: 10/23/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle

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