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Our Life Is a Poem

life is a guesthouse, no one overstays their welcome. As background music slowly muffles into softer tones, breaths struggle to appease. Deep painful faint sighs, fall like crumbling leaves - I'm vulnerable like a naked tree. Autumnal eyes gaze towards my looming winter garden. Heart is a paper bag of emotions, now full of leftover crumbs - where spring once merged with summer petals. Mind is a vague collection of recollections and reflections - forgotten memories, unfulfilled promises, words lost in silence. Destiny tested with her games. I am still a humble child, with no care for winning, nor losing - settling for her stalemate. Regret is that untraveled path, not following the signs - reluctant to feast from the garden of her Eden - pondering if it was worth the sin. Now so many watery eyes, resonate like violin tears. Brown, green and blue - but I do not see hers. Motionless with shivers and chills, Lights are dimming, silence is manifesting. In haziness, silhouettes appear, as life begins to disappear - I can barely hear the music. Our life is a poem, each beat of our hearts a drop of ink. Some leave behind words, some blank pages. Simple Musing Silent One 20 September 2020

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Date: 11/18/2020 3:09:00 AM
More and more I am feeling time run out and realize we must live every day as if it were the last being grateful for having lived. Nice last stanza, Best, SuZ
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Date: 10/28/2020 7:22:00 PM
Life is a poem in more ways than we can really know. I love the way you have it penned, Silent One. Phenomenal ending! :)
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Date: 10/13/2020 9:19:00 AM
What a story/write. Your pen was working overtime. I love it all but the ending, wow!!! Too bad many people leave blank pages in their life book. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Silent One
Date: 10/14/2020 8:51:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/7/2020 3:37:00 PM
The poem called life is exquisitely described in this poetic masterpiece. Beautiful indeed.
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Silent One
Date: 10/8/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 10/5/2020 6:01:00 AM
so apt and well penned..I loved it. thank you..
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Date: 10/4/2020 10:56:00 AM
This is a masterful write SO, such a vivid depiction of the end of life.
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Silent One
Date: 10/5/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thank you John..
Date: 10/3/2020 6:45:00 PM
Such a lovely writer you are. Every line is beautiful! I see Autumn makes you feel sad. This Autumn brings cancer to my mom, one who has taken such good care of her body. My mind feels numb.
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Silent One
Date: 10/4/2020 9:50:00 AM
So sorry to hear about your mum, she is in my thoughts and prayers... People say they love fall, but for me it is the start of everything dying.. although many of my flowers are refusing to crumble at the moment.. Thank you Kim
Date: 10/3/2020 6:12:00 PM
very deep and poignant, Silent One. Sorry I am taking so long to see poet's poems these days.
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Date: 10/1/2020 8:59:00 AM
A great poetry.. An inestimable treasure whose great poet of amazing beauty and wealth! The drops of your ink are flowing to reach the reader's mind and soul.. thank you so much, Silent One, for sharing your profound thoughts and genuine feelings.. A great pleasure to read! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 9/24/2020 9:28:00 PM
Simple Musing? Wow this reads like orchestration to me. Wonderful poetry...
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Date: 9/23/2020 7:47:00 PM
Fantastic verse and use of metaphor.
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Date: 9/23/2020 11:38:00 AM
Brilliant poetry - bravo and bravo - your explain our lives and what they are all about in such a poetic symphony that you amaze me - 'in haziness, silhouettes appear, as life begins to disappear - I can barely hear the music - our Life is a Poem - 'some leave behind words, some blank pages. Kudos Silent One. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Date: 9/22/2020 1:35:00 PM
Silent One, your poem is profound in its poignant portrayal of one’s final moments, the vulnerability of it is palpable as well as the acceptance of it. Your artistry shines with thoughtful depth and moving imagery. Last stanza is especially awesome. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/22/2020 11:23:00 AM
We are fortunate to have someone like you sharing their beautiful poems with us... It would be a shame for such a talented poet to leave any blank pages behind... Keep up the great writing, my friend!
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Date: 9/22/2020 7:06:00 AM
- Like the gentle tones by virtue of emotions and soul ... "our life is a poem" - A beautiful poem, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2020 10:02:00 AM
You make me think of a poem, and nothing can convince me that you weren't born to write them, I enjoyed this verse dear friend, immensely.
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:27:00 AM
we live in borrowed time like our poetry..it can be edited or deleted... deep, insightful work, S.).,,, huggs
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Date: 9/21/2020 6:55:00 AM
Splendid poetry, Si; love the imagery and sincere, profound sense. Sad that we are more reactionary than in command. We need to attract more and repel less, when it comes to our Heart-magnets. No need to wait for tears, far less, to compel them. Oh us romantics will never learn! Our beauty and defeat:)
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:24:00 AM
So true my friend, Thank you..
Date: 9/21/2020 5:48:00 AM
A nice combo of stanzas... I heard that life is a rental...there's a cost...just like the guesthouse I suppose...All the best
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:24:00 AM
The cost is dependable on how we live it... Thank you Arturo..
Date: 9/21/2020 3:32:00 AM
Love the first two lines and the musing in in haziness and silhouette. This would make a great short book with accompanying pictures. Touches the heart.
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Kim, I wanted to portray the final seconds of life..
Date: 9/20/2020 11:46:00 PM
Our lives are written out for us, its up to us to live that life fully and do things while youre fit and healthy, your right, a time will come when we have to check out. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
Yes you are right and it is up to us what we decide to leave behind.. some are happy leaving nothing... Thanks.
Date: 9/20/2020 7:53:00 PM
Even though life does not last, seasons change and moments fade. Each chapter holds a part of us. Time can never erase this. You are right. "Our Life is a Poem" ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Brandy..
Date: 9/20/2020 4:23:00 PM
Love your last two sentences Silent One. Your comparisons are a joy to read my friend. They are clever and original.
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 9/20/2020 2:25:00 PM
wow, this is an amazing one, Silent One. So profound!
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 9/20/2020 2:14:00 PM
Another one! Each and every line is so poetic. Loved it. Awesomely penned.
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Silent One
Date: 9/21/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thank you..
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