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Ostrich Learning To Swim

an ostrich learning to swim in the sea his neck like a stick floating vertically swirling and rounding and bobbing a wave an invisible hand stirs a big cup of tea

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Date: 10/12/2024 10:24:00 AM
What a cute image!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/12/2024 2:26:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 10/12/2024 7:59:00 AM
I love that you leave room for the reader to dance with your poems. I got all the steps first time for the rhythm of vertically and felt proud!
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/12/2024 8:05:00 AM
I wrote it counting on my fingers like I was doing maths at school haha, the last line took some fitting in and rewrites, anyway glad you danced haha, thanks D

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