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February 19, 2025

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Orphan

You chance upon her
in the far reaches of the backyard
a place you never go
and there she trembles  a tiny tiger in a blurred world 
secreted in shadows below blackthorn shrubs 

faint mews draw you closer
the power of her vulnerability
fills your veins with a pulse rising
brimming you with a nectar needed
like a dry stream bed restored by remedy rains

how helpless she is with eyes just opened
her eyes like skylights —translucent
and filled with new wild blue innocence
neglected yet beautiful 
you see the phenomenon of her will to live —
her outsized feistiness 
belying such a petite package of need
with teeny needle claws and protests the wisp of a hiss
...and you recall when you felt small and voiceless 

born a feral
her mother likely lost to speed-wheels of a car
or snap-jaws of coyotes whose throats float howls
above black tree lines with autumn mist and moon
it will never be known for sure
and you wonder   if she wonders 
if the sweet-milk-purrs with soft belly fur
will ever return to snuggle her

she’s been cold and alone for far too long
so you gather her in the hug of your hands
curl your chest around her littleness
a shield formed against her loneness
—a long-ago-child abandoned  a silent
child lost amid foster care noise  is heard—
and you decide not to let Nature take its course

instead you sit with her  swaddle her  love her 
nourish her with eye dropper milk—
embers linger in brick-warm-hearth
as you heal the orphan within
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Date: 3/10/2025 8:23:00 PM
Susan, wow, this is outstanding and excellent in everyway possible, emotional and beautiful, I love it and FAV it, well done, blessings ~
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/12/2025 12:44:00 PM
Dear Constance, I am honored by your beautiful response to my poem. I know you have a tender heart full of love for animals, especially cats, so I'm not surprised that this poem resonated strongly with you. We are so similar in our affection for animals. Thank you for your gracious visit and precious thoughts. The honor of your fav is deeply appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/2/2025 10:26:00 AM
Hello Susan, I love the ending. I am glad the kitten got a new home. My fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2025 11:25:00 AM
Hello Susan, Thank you Susan. This poem deserves a fav. You are welcome my dear friend. Hugs. /Darlene/ Warm wishes.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/2/2025 8:22:00 PM
Dear Darlene, I cherish your beautiful thoughts. The honor of both your friendship and fav is truly appreciated. Thank you for your gracious visit my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 3/1/2025 10:33:00 AM
Soul touching poetry. I took my time, reading every word, feeling every breath, and glimpsing the story between the lines. You are an amazing writer Ms.Susan... and person. I hope there was someone, much like yourself, in your youth, who took you into the hug of their hands to swaddle and norish you, as you did for this brave (and blessed) kitten. Xoxo
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/2/2025 8:19:00 PM
Dear Chystol, thank you for sharing in the emotions and imagery of this poem with me. I’m honored and humbled by your beautiful comments and they are held in my truest appreciation. In gratitude for your kindness and friendship. Warmest wishes, sweet poet friend, your golden pen and heart shines~Susan
Date: 2/25/2025 9:17:00 AM
Dear Susan, Wow, it holds such tender power, an exquisite intertwining of rescue, memory, and healing. I love the way you breathe life into both the tiny tiger and the orphaned soul within is very moving. Love is such a quiet testament to the redemptive power of compassion. Beautifully done. Winter Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/1/2025 8:50:00 AM
Dear Daniel, your compassion is a potent force that extends beyond the confines of the comment box to expand across the universe. Thank you for exploring the emotions and imageries of this poem with me. Your treasured insights are always deep, rich and beautiful, as expressed here - "Love is such a quiet testament to the redemptive power of compassion" - so very true, my poet friend. I am humbled and honored by your kind poetic spirit. Warmest wishes with appreciation.. ~Susan
Date: 2/24/2025 11:53:00 AM
Wow - this was absolutely amazing to read. That ending is so heartwarming... healing the orphan within. Incredible writing! It's so nice to revisit your page! So so many memorable lines. Always, Laura
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/1/2025 8:12:00 AM
Dear Laura, my soulful poet friend, I revel in your return to the pages of PS. It's wonderful to receive your thoughtful, insightful and uplifting comments. Thank you for sharing the the emotions and imageries of this piece with me. Your poetic spirit is truly appreciated and embraced. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/23/2025 5:49:00 AM
Good if that poor animal survive. You have a tender heart.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/27/2025 9:33:00 AM
Dear Victor, thank you for your gracious visit and lovely response to my poem. The beauty of your empathy shines. This poem is as much about the kitten's present as it is about the speaker's past. The orphan within applies to both. Warmest wishes my inspiring poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/22/2025 11:19:00 AM
Sad and beautiful, Susan!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/27/2025 9:31:00 AM
Dear Kim, thank you for your gracious visit and lovely response. Warmest wishes dear poet.. ~Susan
Date: 2/21/2025 4:12:00 AM
It's a tough, cruel world out there and nature is relentless, but sometimes fate takes a helping hand and all is good in the world again.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/21/2025 7:33:00 AM
Dear Paul, thank you for your positive view on my poem. Indeed, it's a tough, cruel world and a helping hand makes all the difference in one's fate. This poem is as much about the kitten's present as it is about the speaker's past. The orphan within applies to both. Thank you for your gracious visit and kindness. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/20/2025 3:08:00 PM
This has a sweetness and compassion that renews faith. I hope that the kitten survived and had a happy life. May your kindness be rewarded.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/21/2025 7:35:00 AM
Dear Hilda, thank you for seeing/feeling the compassion of this poem. This poem is as much about the kitten's present as it is about the speaker's past. The orphan within applies to both. To receive and extend kindness is truly a beautiful thing. Your lovely presence here is truly appreciated, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/20/2025 7:49:00 AM
The last line tugs at my heart dear Susan . I have missed your poems, heart and soul . Healing the orphan within is an ongoing process and can be revisited time and time again through life’s journeys. What a lucky little feral tiger ! Big hugs dear friend. I have missed being here. Sending love and light on the whispers of white wings. Love, Susan :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/20/2025 9:55:00 AM
Dearest Susan, my sweet soulful poetry sister, your glowing presence that so brightens my soul and my poetry pages has sorely been missed. I'm thrilled to see you this morning! Your thoughtful insights are cherished and I revel in sharing the many facets of many lifetimes with you. When the heart shatters the heart can also heal without seams. Big hugs to you my dear friend. Warmest wishes and love sent on the glide of white wings.. ~Susan
Date: 2/19/2025 4:15:00 PM
I love cats so much. This is touching work. What a cat mother you make - :)
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/20/2025 8:48:00 AM
Dear Paige, I've adopted a few feral kittens over the years, all of whom made wonderful pets, especially Fudgie who passed at age 18. So glad to know you were touched by my poem. Your thoughts are cherished, my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Date: 2/19/2025 10:21:00 AM
Hello Susan, this is really a very touching write. It went straight into my heart. To save, care and love a lost soul. Sending Blessings your way, my friend.
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Date: 2/20/2025 8:45:00 AM
Dear Zyrool, I'm honored and touched to know that my poem 'went straight into your heart'. Thank you for sharing in the emotions and imagery of this poem with me. Your thoughts are treasured and your compassion shines. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
Date: 2/19/2025 10:17:00 AM
Oh Susan your poem is so moving l love the lines ....she wonders "if sweet milk purrs with soft belly fur will ever return to snuggle her" that is just beautiful it makes me want to care for and snuggle the little orphan.....Debx
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Date: 2/20/2025 8:42:00 AM
Dear Deb, it's wonderful to see you! Thank you for your treasured thoughts. I'm so glad to know my verse moved you. The beauty of your empathy shines as brilliantly as your golden pen! I find the line you highlighted to be on of my fav lines in the poem too. My heart goes out to the helpless among us. Warmest wishes my sweet poet friend.. ~Susan
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