Originals

I don’t know that anything about me
is original – I mean, all of my atoms,
I’ve been told, once belonged to some
dimwit creature (hmm...) roaming the earth 
long before air-conditioners and Mai Tais...

And talk about Sin! – now that’s an Original
I would gladly give my share away in 
a heartbeat; sure as hell, not missing a 
cinder of the concept – though, if not the 
world itself, I have no recollection of a 
bountiful garden...while readily admitting
to having dined and drank with more than 
one size and specie of venomous serpent – 

But of all my Non Originals, the abiding 
presence of love within me is a lineage
I would gladly claim as my own, were I
asked, praying to be absolved of any penance
if untrue. And, if false...then I would claim,
even more vociferously, my uncompromising 
capacity to forgive all, thus hopefully moving 
existing originals into the Lord's Grace of 
Transformative Light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/11/2020 8:25:00 AM
Enlightened and satisfying words, Joe. I really enjoy your clarity of expression, and stimulating mental patterns. The bits and pieces of bone flesh and hair may share atoms with the rest of life forms, yet the essential You goes on unique.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/12/2020 4:41:00 PM
Hi Geoffrey; truly appreciate your encouragement. Blessings my friend!
Date: 9/25/2020 3:41:00 PM
Prince DeMino...A FAV. I am one of your fand, don't you know? You brush not only the physical world, but the theosophical ones as well. And your humor is within the poem. You don't need to write limericks. You are a kick, as is. Pangie xx
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/25/2020 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Pangie; you made my day. Actually, my wife, Ila, was a member of the Theosophical Society, and taught the Mysteries in New Mexico back in the late 60's. So, you never know what you'll see floating around our house:)
Date: 9/25/2020 2:20:00 PM
I am impressed with the about the last five lines. Enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for visiting my page. Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/25/2020 2:29:00 PM
Thank you, Sara; so pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a great day!!
Date: 9/25/2020 12:02:00 PM
Hello DiMino, when we are born we are borthern into sin. I pray every evening to God. For he is my father and I speak to him every night. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2020 11:41:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, yes he is my father. yes I speak to him every night. I come to him also when i have problems. Thank you my friend. enjoy your day.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 9/25/2020 2:19:00 PM
Hi Darlene; I love the way you said that, He is your Father, and you speak to Him every night. There is nothing to fear...and we can come to Him with any problem. Great comment!
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