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Origin by Wilma N. Neels deep within ideas filter through me birth on paper echoing my feelings every emotion, happy or sad all part of me evolving hitting home For the Contest: "Where Your Poetry Comes From" 2 Tetractys only 260720111222

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/1/2011 4:12:00 PM

congrats on a shared 5th place! very well written, each word has impact and has been thoughtfully chosen...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 1:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Michael J. Falotico's " Where Your Poetry Comes From" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 3:06:00 PM

A "Where Your Poetry Comes From" Winner Congratulations! Caryl

Joseph Osita

Date: 7/30/2011 5:56:00 PM

A well crafted tetractys! Many congrats on your big win in Michael's contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2011 3:04:00 PM

HI, Wilma, I don' t think I'd seen this one yet. It's great work and I'm glad for your win. Congratulations!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/30/2011 2:56:00 PM

Lovely write. Many congrats, Wilma : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/30/2011 1:29:00 PM

wilms.. astounding! a round of sparkling cheers for your great win! :)huggs!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/30/2011 1:04:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your big win ...this one I liked very much.

Tim B

Date: 7/30/2011 12:34:00 PM

You give birth to many beautiful poems Mrs. Wilma! Congrats on your win for this excellent poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/30/2011 9:46:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on a fabulous fifth place win with always awesome amazing words my friend... super one..luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/30/2011 9:38:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile~~~*-*junjun

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/30/2011 8:48:00 AM

Congrats Wilma!!! I love the write from the soul to the paper...love Michael....

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/30/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats Wilma!!! I love the write form the soul to the paper...love Michael....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 4:00:00 PM

Good that you write from the heart and feelings..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in Michael's contest...Reads like winners' circle to me..Thanks for the encouraging words on my blog...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 1:35:00 PM

I love the way you write from your heart, filtering the ideas and expressing each emotion in verse. Best wishes in the contest with this gem, Wilma! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 7/28/2011 7:12:00 AM

A chart topper here Wilma....beautiful write....enjoyed.

James Fraser

Date: 7/27/2011 5:49:00 PM

Blimey, I have no idea where to start about me. Good luck in the contest Wilma :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/27/2011 9:03:00 AM

enjoyed I don't know about me....sometimes it is a good thought that has gone bad.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/27/2011 8:20:00 AM

hI Willma! Good morning to you! Yup guess that's about where they come from. Sometimes don;t know how or why but they do and we write em if we can catch them. Nice job. Thanks for your wishes and comment today. Saying one for you.... :) <

Lee Ramage

Date: 7/27/2011 12:23:00 AM

well done. Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2011 9:52:00 PM

VERY nice, Wilma. Lots of poets are doing such great ones here. I am betting it will be very full list!! (or it should be at least) Yours should be near the top!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/26/2011 9:29:00 PM

Lovely done, wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2011 2:01:00 PM

I sure loved how your one syllable words here have an Impact! Way to go, missy! and your title for this is wonderful as well! Yup, it definitely comes from "deep within" and :hits home" -- you captured it quite well in this tetractys! eep I am awake and this is your wake up time?? heehee ;) mwahugs -- I sure do hope you got back to a normal sleep cycle ;)

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/26/2011 12:44:00 PM

Wilma: You stirred up emotion on paper with this one. Good luck in Michael's contest my friend. Caryl Ramsdale

James Peranteau

Date: 7/26/2011 11:01:00 AM

Great entry Wilma ! I love to hear the thoughts of a poet...always strikes my heart as knowing the poet a lil' more ! Have a wondeful week dear poet ! Much love, james