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Orgasm

In the stillness of the heart, a tropical storm awakens, Stirred by a caress, rebellious senses unfurl. With passion's penetrating embrace, liberation is found— A moment of bliss, where souls find peace. Our intoxicating union sends cries into the sky. * 2010 poem found on my lonely old computer

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Date: 3/21/2024 6:58:00 AM
A wow-write!
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/21/2024 7:03:00 AM
Seeker, thank you. So glad you liked “Orgasm.”
Date: 3/17/2024 3:29:00 PM
A tasteful expression.
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/17/2024 4:22:00 PM
Thanks, Richard! All in good taste to remain PG to slightly R! Don
Date: 3/17/2024 3:27:00 PM
this was...very enjoyable ;) got any more hidden away on your old computer?
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/17/2024 4:21:00 PM
Charlotte, search and rescue for lost poems! LOL. Thank you
Date: 3/17/2024 1:16:00 PM
Awesome write
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/17/2024 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Yolanda. I appreciate the read and comment.
Date: 3/17/2024 7:21:00 AM
I love finding "forgotten" poems on my hard drive. LOL. Nice one Don! :)
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/17/2024 7:36:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you. When we write so many poems, we sometimes forget them. Then again, maybe some poems choose to “take leave of us!”
Date: 3/17/2024 5:41:00 AM
'When passion awakens the storm within ecstasy explodes with bliss... Very nicely penned Don
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/17/2024 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Joseph. Some poems seem to be orgasmic. Perhaps a theme for A future poetry competition?
Date: 3/16/2024 2:25:00 PM
Don, I was almost afraid to open this one (lol). The pleasure so strong as part of our incentive as a species to reproduce. Funny how this evolved and what it does to our brain. The feelings before and after are not so bad either. So funny that your old computer was lonely--even with this residing within. I might expect this one to get a lot of views...yet to be determined.
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Don Iannone
Date: 3/16/2024 5:38:00 PM
Duke, thankfully you did! Yes, all you said is true. In the meantime, let’s us erupt in the present moment’s beauty! Cheers, don

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