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Ordinary Man

Snow is falling and floods are flowing,
people dying and children keep crying,
but he's just an ordinary man,
sitting there watching TV.

Icebergs melting and penguins starving,
men in suits talking and big guns firing,
but he's just an ordinary man
playing on his smartphone.
 
Storms blowing and seas are raging,
children starving and refugees leaving,
but he's just an ordinary man
at home warm and free.

He seems confused,
Daffodils no longer bloom in Spring,
bumble bees have stopped buzzing, 
butterflies have stopped floating,
confused birds have stopped flying and
factories have plumes of smoke burning,
but he's just an ordinary man
sitting in his garden all alone.

So who is he to fight?
He just follows the rules he is told.
Instead of trying to be something he is not.
Because he is just an ordinary man.

The Silent One
Simple musing
11 January 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Richards Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Every "ordinary" man, or woman can make a difference in the world. Some in large ways, some in small ways, but the power is within each of us to try to better this planet. I love this poem, and the message it has :) Well done!
One Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Carrie..
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 1:19 PM
It's beyond sad when people feel so dis-empowered. Whenever given the opportunity EMPOWER someone (teach the man to fish don't give them fish). Light & Love
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 2:46 PM
I feel so honoured a poet of your calibre would comment on my poem...Thank you
Maverick Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:08 AM
Hello Si, I'm glad I chose this to read it better to do positive things and airing the valid situation the world faces is one important one' I see the response was good to this piece. I will send a mail soon'
One Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thanks
Macdonald Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:38 PM
Well written and so very, very true !
Lindley Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 4:10 PM
Love it. Ordinary men can at times do extraordinary things,as history clearly reveals. And some of those are the legendary poets that we read and truly admire.. Magnificent verses my friend.
Ashley Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:11 PM
A powerful poem told in subtle moral tones Silent One. Complacency will be our demise. An elegant and eloquent plea to raise awareness to the crises (so many) around the world.. Beautifully expressed my friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Spagnola Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 2:43 PM
I love the call out to all in your piece. Many considered 'ordinary' can do small things that when combined can make an extraordinary impact. Great to read you again :)Peace, Jill
Evangelista Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 9:20 PM
So me, an ordinary me ^_^ very beautiful poem, where an ordinary man who is just at home versus the happenings around him. Is a wake up call to people who can do something ^^ cheers!
Downing  Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Your musings are extremely beautiful and heartfelt... Hugs and smiles :)
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you..
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 11:12 AM
An existential gem, SO. Very subtle inferences of moral gravity's pull on our psyche. Extraordinary results occurs when we don't merely go w/the flow. Ordinary neglect is pen actionable. Great write! Love and much respect always.
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thanks
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 7:53 PM
This is a powerful poem, Silent One. I think many of us are too ordinary in this respect. I know I am. Probably only good thing I do for the environment is use my own bags at the store and not plastic! Great poem.
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:45 AM
We can all do something.. yet so many do not... thanks..
Leiser Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Quite a convicting poem, Silent, and an eloquent call to action. We ordinary citizens can do many things to help the needy right where we are at...and, though not yet mentioned, there is also the power of prayer, entreating God to intervene. Great message!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Laura..but its humans eho must do God's work.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Testaments all to the COMPLACENCY of the ordinary man. People roll on agreeing, "Yes, you're right", what's required is a Revolution of the Ordinary Man.
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Leanne.
Horsman Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Wow he's a hero, no stress, Oh yes love it and seriously i get the theme, you tell it well, Oh Silent One.
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Harry.
Anish Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Reminiscent of W.H. Auden's Th Unknown Citizen. Or perhaps a Ray Bradbury tale! Good job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Matthew..
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Love the total capture of the futility (or seeming) of the fight...one man against the tidal of it all and the accompanying artwork is Stunning
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Ingrid..
Pett Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Excellent poetry, ordinary man has so much power he just needs directing down the right road, this is so well written a joy to read. :))
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Yes indeed... Thank you Roy..
Hopper Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 1:25 PM
There is so much truth in this poem. It is going to take some ordinary people, to do something extraordinary and make a difference! Beautiful!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:54 AM
I agree... Thank you Anna..
Gentile Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 12:12 PM
This one is so on point, Silent One and sad because it is real. Ordinary people really don't know what to do and when our leaders let us down... time to get NEW leaders!! well done!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Mike..
Pandit Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:30 AM
A great message for the ordinary man..and everyone not so ordinary. I feel that your poem is a silent call to action..well written, friend. I feel the pain you speak of.
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:55 AM
We all should feel the pain.. Thank you Vijay
Wanter Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:19 AM
The ordinary man(woman) becomes extraordinary in the voting booth and with expressions of caring in his/her life. He is like that "rock in a pool" spreading. So very sad if he thinks he is nothing. Your poetry is so profound!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Sunlite.
S     Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:47 AM
A simple musing with a HUGE message we can't ignore!!! Another great write SO!!!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Judy..
Ellison Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:18 AM
You nailed it my friend... so sad but so true! Well written sir!!!
One Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Jack
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Wow. Yup. Tucking this one in the fave drawer.
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Mo..
Trifiatis Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:53 AM
You have written a manifesto of irresponsibility form the part of ordinary man who represents the vast majority of humanity! I have to congratulate you for getting up and worn about the upcoming calamities. If we do not wake up soon we will never wake up alive! SUPERB my friend, S.O.!
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 8:10 AM
You are right, thank you Demetrios..
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