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Orbits

orbits we surf the sun this orb its golden loot of treasure or bits of gathered thoughts in their orbits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/7/2023 8:57:00 PM
evocative in its brevity, cleverly spun. i liked this.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/7/2023 11:22:00 PM
spun.. orbits.. thanks for your kind words Mat

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