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Orange October

October's sheaves of leaves are here, Breeze blowing mid trees dances down, Swirls and twirls of gold, auburn cheer, Stark branch and bark stand out in brown, Breeze blowing mid trees dances down, Plump pumpkins hail Halloween scene, Stark branch and bark stand out in brown, Trick and treaters quick party preen, Plump pumpkins hail Halloween scene, Swirls and twirls of gold, auburn cheer, Trick and treaters quick party preen, October's sheaves of leaves are here. October 23, 2019

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Date: 12/24/2019 6:15:00 PM
Way to go with the win that you deserved first time! MErry Christmas too, Jo.
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:29:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Jo
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:37:00 PM
Hey Jo nice to see you around again, seems like a lot of Pantoum's didn't win in the contest, but this time you got a nice placement, congrats and nice to see you back!
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Date: 10/30/2019 9:35:00 AM
This is beautiful Lu Loo said I need to meet you because you're a true Christian... me too and I will read more of your work when I have a chance. This is wonderful and prayers for you, Gina
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Date: 10/30/2019 8:50:00 AM
You did this perfectly, I do enjoy this form. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 10/23/2019 2:30:00 PM
lovely imagery and choice of words..
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Date: 10/23/2019 10:16:00 AM
You have some lovely sounds and images going on in this October scene, Jo. Did you mean to write lines 2 and 5 slightly differently, though as I believe this form needs to repeat exactly the same.
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Date: 10/23/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for pointing that out, Wendy. I edited one line and forgot the other one
Date: 10/23/2019 9:19:00 AM
Simply beautiful--just like the colors of October..all the best, Jo.
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Date: 10/23/2019 8:19:00 AM
So nicely done my friend,. I am thrilled to see something new from you, it has been a while. I loved everything about this, I could feel autumn and see Halloween night in your words. Best wishes in the contest
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