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there is something about twilight ~ energy entangled with light and love wrapping the familiar in shadow tied with a bow nothing is there in the bright lights ~ lethargy sprawled not with light and love but exposing the strange with unwanted crystal clarity

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Date: 12/18/2023 1:22:00 PM
a reverse poem...hadn't actually ever thought of that...I appreciate the idea. Thanks for your creativity and perspective. Have a great day, Sara
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/18/2023 1:24:00 PM
You're welcome - it's magical, very through the looking glass if you let your mind wander
Date: 12/17/2023 5:34:00 PM
nicely expressed -
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/18/2023 12:22:00 PM
isn't that the truth - good idea for a contest
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/18/2023 12:16:00 PM
It's a very fun little game to reverse poems - although for me I tend to turn miserable poems into light-hearted ones. Perhaps less delightful if you start out with flowers and rainbows :)
Date: 12/17/2023 3:23:00 PM
What a great idea for a contest!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/18/2023 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Lin, the contest list was looking a bit light so thought I'd throw something different in the mix

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