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If gifts were hung like tempting ripened fruit, forbidden to but one the tree would share; what turmoil would possess my thoughts to bear when tossed in sweet decisions to dispute. Until I reach with cause so resolute, one for which all reason should prepare, I tremble, lost in doubts that feign to dare - the choice a hasty heart deemed absolute. So much to choose on each embellished limb, promises of health and wealth and fame - intelligence and beauty to possess. Yet there upon the laden boughs they trim I grasped the only one my heart would claim, the brightest of them all was happiness!

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Date: 12/22/2023 3:03:00 PM
A charming and flawless write Craig. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 12/22/2023 1:09:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. I think, however, that without good health, it's very hard to have much happiness. Congrats.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/22/2023 6:58:00 PM
Thank you AD & very true BTW - you know about that for sure. Hope you have a very happy and healthy Christmas!
Date: 12/31/2019 7:12:00 PM
Happy New Year Craig. I see you are still the King of Sonnets.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/2/2020 2:15:00 PM
Happy New Year Richard
Date: 12/30/2019 2:12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this, exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you.
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Date: 12/29/2019 4:21:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Craig, and yes, still alive and well and I do pop into soup now and then to see what's going on. I learnt so much on this site. I am writing fiction now with the help of Harry. All the best for the new year.
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:56:00 AM
Great example, Craig. I have never tried to write an Italian Sonnet but my muse might want to give it a try. Merry Christmas and a blessed and Happy New Year my friend.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/26/2019 11:43:00 AM
Thank you Charlie--and a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you!
Date: 12/21/2019 11:45:00 AM
Very nicely done, Craig. Far better than one I wrote but didn't post. Had trouble with the theme. This is a good example for your contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Craig Cornish
Date: 12/22/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thanks so much Carolyn - I also struggled with my own muse.

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