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One Raindrop

the sky is milky gray heavy with expectation threatening clouds swirl and billow the air is thick and humid, one raindrop falls then, another and another ... __________________ August 11, 2021 Poetry/Imagism/one raindrop Copyright Protected, ID 08-1380-308-11 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Brian Strand 4 or 5 lines sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/12/2021 First Place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2021 8:18:00 AM

This is an amazing entry, Constance. I will write a Soupmail to you now

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2021 5:24:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment ~Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/12/2021 4:08:00 PM

Hello Constance, a beautiful poem of raindrops. I love the raindrops hitting the roof . i listen to the sound it is peaceful. Serenity friendship. Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/14/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hello Constance, I love the raindrops to Constance. I like to watch them dripping down the window. Serenity & love Darlene.

Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2021 5:24:00 PM

Darlene, thank you for the compliment, I love raindrops too ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/12/2021 7:05:00 AM

Threatening Clouds... Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2021 1:26:00 PM

Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/12/2021 6:31:00 AM

This is amazing. I love it. Appeals to my heart and soul with it's amazing imagery and poetic warmth. Brilliant. God bless you, Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2021 6:59:00 AM

Gina, thank you for the compliment and visit ~ love and serenity _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2021 3:22:00 AM

The imagery is so beautiful, Constance:)

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2021 6:59:00 AM

Jo, thank you so much for your visit and the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/11/2021 5:29:00 PM

This is not only gorgeous, but it also inspires peace in the spirit. You did an incredible job.

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2021 7:00:00 AM

Lasaad, thank you for the compliment on my poem. I have been on a long journey to find my peace, and I have finally found it and it feels wonderful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 8/11/2021 3:15:00 PM

wow, you must be seeing out my window. Great one.

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2021 7:03:00 AM

Eve, thank you for the visit, lol, it was suppose to rain, even be a thunderstorm for days now, but we only get fragmented sprinkles. We need a good downpour to cut this humidity and heat. ~ love and serenity _Constance